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MEMORIES SLAYED (ACROSTIC)
Midnight magick melds and mingles
Evening's tragic hands-held tingles
Moments upon moments forever vow
Over the eternal moments of now
Reveries of destiny
Inside the fading rest of me
Evoking a moment that will always be
Some joke of neverending mystery
Solemn silence screams resistance
Laughter lingering in the distance
All that is still still fails to stay
Yesterday still torn away
Evening flickering within persistence
Dead like yesterday
Evening's tragic hands-held tingles
Moments upon moments forever vow
Over the eternal moments of now
Reveries of destiny
Inside the fading rest of me
Evoking a moment that will always be
Some joke of neverending mystery
Solemn silence screams resistance
Laughter lingering in the distance
All that is still still fails to stay
Yesterday still torn away
Evening flickering within persistence
Dead like yesterday
Published 20th Aug 2017
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20th Aug 2017 8:05pm
that one gets a "WoW!" - a rhyming acrostic, now that's just showing off (lol)
fantastic write :-)
fantastic write :-)
21st Aug 2017 5:34am
well hell, man, thank you. . I love your work and always appreciate your encouragement.
I wrote an acrostic SLAY for the acrostic challenge, changing the one letter from SALT
Taryn got there before me, so I just kept writing------------------ ---- --- -- -
I wrote an acrostic SLAY for the acrostic challenge, changing the one letter from SALT
Taryn got there before me, so I just kept writing------------------ ---- --- -- -
21st Aug 2017 4:36pm
Fantastic piece. I truly appreciate the rhythm and rhyme. The alliteration is outstanding!
"Moments upon moments forever vow
Over the eternal moments of now"
Love the message in this verse!
Well done and thank you for sharing.
"Moments upon moments forever vow
Over the eternal moments of now"
Love the message in this verse!
Well done and thank you for sharing.
