Acrostic Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#acrostic
KittyFromHell
Poem Published
1st Aug 2024 5:56pm
1st Aug 2024 5:56pm
Run
Revisiting remembrances rips rapidly, and
Reckless reverie reverses ruthlessly.
Ruined romps ravage repulsive roads
Repeating rashly rebellious realities.
Undoing uglies utmost unsettling
Upon unbound uncertainties,
Unique understandings unveil
Unavailing usurpations of unwavering.
No new note keeping novelty
Nearly nourishes my nitpicking nature.
Nonstop needling, narcissistic nettles,
Niceties never noticing a noggin nicer.
Reckless reverie reverses ruthlessly.
Ruined romps ravage repulsive roads
Repeating rashly rebellious realities.
Undoing uglies utmost unsettling
Upon unbound uncertainties,
Unique understandings unveil
Unavailing usurpations of unwavering.
No new note keeping novelty
Nearly nourishes my nitpicking nature.
Nonstop needling, narcissistic nettles,
Niceties never noticing a noggin nicer.
#acrostic
#escape
#MentalHealth
#metaphor
#rhyming
105 reads
2 Comments
Ljdynamic
Poem Published
18th Jun 2024 5:09am
18th Jun 2024 5:09am
Thursday Night with John
According to your
bylaws I am supposed to
care about things of
dire importance to you.
Ever think that I give no
fucks about your interest?
Grimacing as I pretend to
hang on your every word.
I am doing exceptionally well
juggling the words and
keeping my eyes open.
Listening to your boring story about
marketing and advertising.
Not to rush the situation,
obviously, you want your needs met.
Paid hourly, I am counting
quietly those
remaining
seconds before
the new hour starts. ...
bylaws I am supposed to
care about things of
dire importance to you.
Ever think that I give no
fucks about your interest?
Grimacing as I pretend to
hang on your every word.
I am doing exceptionally well
juggling the words and
keeping my eyes open.
Listening to your boring story about
marketing and advertising.
Not to rush the situation,
obviously, you want your needs met.
Paid hourly, I am counting
quietly those
remaining
seconds before
the new hour starts. ...
#acrostic
#apathy
#fiction #StreamOfConsciousness
#fiction #StreamOfConsciousness
47 reads
34 Comments
Duice
Poem Published
17th Jun 2024 2:01pm
17th Jun 2024 2:01pm
Let Go(d)
Proverbs 3:5-6
Trust in the LORD with all [ your heart ]
and lean not on your [ own understanding ];
in all your ways submit [ to him ],
and he will make your [ paths straight ].
When I'm laid in that resin pine box I hope they say [ "He lived" ]
Ignited all cares flicked to the wind still without a kind regard [ to give ]
AWAKEN to a phoenix shriek soaring out smelted [ molten ash ]
Paused chest purified wiping the charcoal quick adjust as [ I dash ]
Fiercely burning bound in breast poised in kevlar plated [ rib cages ] ...
Trust in the LORD with all [ your heart ]
and lean not on your [ own understanding ];
in all your ways submit [ to him ],
and he will make your [ paths straight ].
When I'm laid in that resin pine box I hope they say [ "He lived" ]
Ignited all cares flicked to the wind still without a kind regard [ to give ]
AWAKEN to a phoenix shriek soaring out smelted [ molten ash ]
Paused chest purified wiping the charcoal quick adjust as [ I dash ]
Fiercely burning bound in breast poised in kevlar plated [ rib cages ] ...
#heartbroken
#prayer
#acrostic
#acceptance
#breakup
266 reads
2 Comments
Nizana
Lauryn
Lauryn
Poem Published
12th May 2024 1:06pm
12th May 2024 1:06pm
MOTHER
M is for magnetic, that attraction that she used to draw lovers to herself.
O is for orgasmic, for those sensations that fulfilled the desires of her heart.
T is for tempting, for her breaking down of restraints.
H is for hot, for the heat she shared with so many.
E is for enchanting, for that ability she had to bring others into her mysterious life.
R is for romantic, for that aspect of love she longed for most and found the least.
O is for orgasmic, for those sensations that fulfilled the desires of her heart.
T is for tempting, for her breaking down of restraints.
H is for hot, for the heat she shared with so many.
E is for enchanting, for that ability she had to bring others into her mysterious life.
R is for romantic, for that aspect of love she longed for most and found the least.
#acrostic
#death
#mother
308 reads
4 Comments
rowantree
Poem Published
19th Apr 2022 6:52pm
19th Apr 2022 6:52pm
sluts, they say
Sultry
lovers
usurping
tyranny,
stay unafraid.
Bring boldness
easily into
palaces pristine.
Riot
onward
under noses and belts.
Don't you dare let them
kill or cover your
evergreen
eagerness to
please yourself.
You
own forces they can't
understand.
Release them.
People who shame you
ought to
wonder why men tell us it's
evil to
rule your own life.
lovers
usurping
tyranny,
stay unafraid.
Bring boldness
easily into
palaces pristine.
Riot
onward
under noses and belts.
Don't you dare let them
kill or cover your
evergreen
eagerness to
please yourself.
You
own forces they can't
understand.
Release them.
People who shame you
ought to
wonder why men tell us it's
evil to
rule your own life.
#power
#freedom
#acrostic
559 reads
0 Comments
MicaLove
Poem Published
8th Dec 2021 6:04pm
8th Dec 2021 6:04pm
Abandonment, No More
All alone is her constant mood yet she is surrounded
By many loved ones and objects.
Atonement is what you ask for when you treated her with such
Neglect and unworthiness and broke one too many promises?
Do you even know or care the damage
Of which these
Non-fulfillment of duties you vowed to honor
May have caused?
Every cell in her being screams she will
Never let this happen to her again.
Till her last breath, she will heal, love, show love, and ensure every piece is put back into place, so her insides match what the world sees on...
By many loved ones and objects.
Atonement is what you ask for when you treated her with such
Neglect and unworthiness and broke one too many promises?
Do you even know or care the damage
Of which these
Non-fulfillment of duties you vowed to honor
May have caused?
Every cell in her being screams she will
Never let this happen to her again.
Till her last breath, she will heal, love, show love, and ensure every piece is put back into place, so her insides match what the world sees on...
#sadness
#love
#depression
#acrostic
#TimeHeals
339 reads
4 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
6th Jul 2020 1:07pm
6th Jul 2020 1:07pm
ACROSTIC - LABIA
Lower lips,
Artfully aroused,
Blood-infused, burn
Intensely in
Anticipation!
Artfully aroused,
Blood-infused, burn
Intensely in
Anticipation!
#women
#erotic
#acrostic #FreeVerse
#acrostic #FreeVerse
602 reads
5 Comments
Hunterapsych
Poem Published
8th Feb 2020 7:10pm
8th Feb 2020 7:10pm
Acrostic - Cannabis
Commencing to calm and quell
Anger and frustration
Noticably chill
Negativity negated
Ambient atmosphere within
Bliss insistent on infesting
Inner
Serenity
Anger and frustration
Noticably chill
Negativity negated
Ambient atmosphere within
Bliss insistent on infesting
Inner
Serenity
#universe
#peace
#marijuana
#acrostic
#meditation
448 reads
4 Comments
NewBeginnings
Poem Published
8th Jan 2020 7:21am
8th Jan 2020 7:21am
Winter (acrostic)
Winter's chill washes over the land;
Icy winds blow as flurries of snow
Nip at your nose—
Toasting marshmallows by the fire,
Embraced by its warm glow,
Returning feeling to frozen toes
Icy winds blow as flurries of snow
Nip at your nose—
Toasting marshmallows by the fire,
Embraced by its warm glow,
Returning feeling to frozen toes
#winter
#fire
#nature
#snow
#acrostic
888 reads
34 Comments
AnonymousBystander
Poem Published
29th Apr 2019 5:41pm
29th Apr 2019 5:41pm
A Cross Stick
Quite frankly, I'm pleased Assange is
under arrest. He broke the law,
in the opinion of my
superiors. They say he's a
lecherous pervert and rapist.
I hope they lock him up and he
never sees the light of day.
Good result of 'justice for all.'
under arrest. He broke the law,
in the opinion of my
superiors. They say he's a
lecherous pervert and rapist.
I hope they lock him up and he
never sees the light of day.
Good result of 'justice for all.'
#politics
#acrostic
555 reads
2 Comments
SatInUGal
Kumar
Kumar
Poem Published
15th Apr 2019 5:19pm
15th Apr 2019 5:19pm
A L I C I A
(Alicia acrostic visual)
#love
#acrostic
633 reads
7 Comments
cabcool
Poem Published
15th Mar 2019 5:58pm
15th Mar 2019 5:58pm
candy
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chestnut confectionary nurturer of my cool cinnamon chocolate curiosity
amid amorphous, anomalous aphorisms that angst my
nascent nobility, you nourish my nectary needs with such
diligence that I dread your delicious denouement even as desperately as I
yearn for the yow of your yummy yesability.
© Copyright 2019 March 15
by Clyve A. Bowen
http://mydo.cx/ODExNjI4
chestnut confectionary nurturer of my cool cinnamon chocolate curiosity
amid amorphous, anomalous aphorisms that angst my
nascent nobility, you nourish my nectary needs with such
diligence that I dread your delicious denouement even as desperately as I
yearn for the yow of your yummy yesability.
© Copyright 2019 March 15
by Clyve A. Bowen
#romantic
#acrostic
#admiration
1088 reads
0 Comments
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