Poems on William Shakespeare Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems on William Shakespeare seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
The Gay Adventures of Billy Shakespeare & Wally Whitman - Act 1

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#RalphWaldoEmerson
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The Cherubs in the Holy of Holies Reveal the Truth of Evolution!!!
This poem is practice for the video i want to make.
about the meaning of the 2 cherubs on top of the Ark of the Covenant
in the Holy of Holies -
In the Temple that used to be in Jerusalem.
Anyway, the 2 cherubs are COMPOSITE FIGURES: part eagle, part ox, part lion. And with the head of a man.
Since i am into (theistic) EVOLUTION, i am always on the alert for any
passage in the Bible that i come across that supports evolution.
Evolution boils down to the idea that all life forms are connected
(the first species produces the...
about the meaning of the 2 cherubs on top of the Ark of the Covenant
in the Holy of Holies -
In the Temple that used to be in Jerusalem.
Anyway, the 2 cherubs are COMPOSITE FIGURES: part eagle, part ox, part lion. And with the head of a man.
Since i am into (theistic) EVOLUTION, i am always on the alert for any
passage in the Bible that i come across that supports evolution.
Evolution boils down to the idea that all life forms are connected
(the first species produces the...
#WilliamShakespeare
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Unfaithful
Cometh hither I plead
As I expound on thy beauty
Thy quim a wondrous fruit
Thine ass an apple of orchards blossom
Thy lips, plump, supple,
Exquisitely divine
Lift up thy petticoat
As I vouchsafe upon thy will
My will
Betwixt us
Sins elixir
Lust
As we did lie in the throes of passion
I breathe thy scent of paradisiac remorse
I remember
‘Hell hath no fury
Like a woman scorned’
Thus evening falls
And I return to the melancholy ...
As I expound on thy beauty
Thy quim a wondrous fruit
Thine ass an apple of orchards blossom
Thy lips, plump, supple,
Exquisitely divine
Lift up thy petticoat
As I vouchsafe upon thy will
My will
Betwixt us
Sins elixir
Lust
As we did lie in the throes of passion
I breathe thy scent of paradisiac remorse
I remember
‘Hell hath no fury
Like a woman scorned’
Thus evening falls
And I return to the melancholy ...
#lust
#erotic
#betrayal
#beauty
#WilliamShakespeare
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Much Ado About Nothing
Luvs, Darlings, Sweeties,
thespians, lesbians, and has-beens,
Tarts, Farts, and Passionate Hearts,
Dinner Suits, Boots, Old Coots,
Frumps, Humps, Those down in the dumps,
Seers, Queers, Sweet Old Dears,
Purists, Jurists, American Tourists,
Lords, Ladies, Gentlemen, Children,
all other members of the human race and Drama critics,
"What the Hell do you think you are doing?"
Sitting there night after night, paying inflated prices
to watch busty middle aged women and brainless
young men prance around in tights performing. ...
thespians, lesbians, and has-beens,
Tarts, Farts, and Passionate Hearts,
Dinner Suits, Boots, Old Coots,
Frumps, Humps, Those down in the dumps,
Seers, Queers, Sweet Old Dears,
Purists, Jurists, American Tourists,
Lords, Ladies, Gentlemen, Children,
all other members of the human race and Drama critics,
"What the Hell do you think you are doing?"
Sitting there night after night, paying inflated prices
to watch busty middle aged women and brainless
young men prance around in tights performing. ...
#LifeAsAWriter
#WilliamShakespeare
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Las tres hermanas
The 3rd witch: 'Anon!'.
The 2nd witch: Be stayed at once.
The 1st witch: Brute should kiss death.
All: Oui,Cat's-fierce,hoodlum hood,death shall kill death.
18:01:27:07:55
inspired by Shakespeare's Macbeth.
The 2nd witch: Be stayed at once.
The 1st witch: Brute should kiss death.
All: Oui,Cat's-fierce,hoodlum hood,death shall kill death.
18:01:27:07:55
inspired by Shakespeare's Macbeth.
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You must know
You must know there are times
I will not choose you over the poem;
nor your email, text or pouting silence
over the verse;
Bulging zippers will not sway me
nor swollen suitcases by the entrance.
If you want to be first in someone’s life
you must know, it can never be mine.
I'll never be the faithful wife
skinning vegetables at the sink;
a gimlet eye’d grandmother supervising,
starched apron and recipe splayed
submissively across the counter -
contents spooned carefully;
the roast, flayed,...
I will not choose you over the poem;
nor your email, text or pouting silence
over the verse;
Bulging zippers will not sway me
nor swollen suitcases by the entrance.
If you want to be first in someone’s life
you must know, it can never be mine.
I'll never be the faithful wife
skinning vegetables at the sink;
a gimlet eye’d grandmother supervising,
starched apron and recipe splayed
submissively across the counter -
contents spooned carefully;
the roast, flayed,...
#SylviaPlath
#WilliamShakespeare
#confessional
#LifeAsAWriter
#PabloNeruda
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54 Comments
Shakespeare Corrupted

#erotic
#parody
#dirty #WilliamShakespeare
#dirty #WilliamShakespeare
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Just for you
If Shakespeare were here
you would be his tragedy
Mozart and Beethoven
you would be their symphony
Galileo would gaze into the stars
and give a planet your name
Christopher Columbus
would sail the ocean blue
and Neil Armstrong
would fly you to the moon
while Hemingway writes
a bestseller
all about you
The Great Houdini
would chain himself up
and face...
you would be his tragedy
Mozart and Beethoven
you would be their symphony
Galileo would gaze into the stars
and give a planet your name
Christopher Columbus
would sail the ocean blue
and Neil Armstrong
would fly you to the moon
while Hemingway writes
a bestseller
all about you
The Great Houdini
would chain himself up
and face...
#romantic
#WilliamShakespeare
#ErnestHemingway #love
#ErnestHemingway #love
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Witches Spell
Let it rain with lemon pepper
And clear it out with a heart of a heifer
At the sound of a bullets bang
And the cry of a stab from a wolf’s fang
With the burns of the scorching vinegar
As the ashes fall from the broken cigar
Pour down the waters from up above
As the sweet victory and mercy of love
Can hum a tune of his last days about
As soon as the light from the candle blows out
Watches as his enemy falls down
Knowing Macduff has won the crown
On the ground, Macbeth lays
Thinking about his savage days
For there’s no sympathy...
And clear it out with a heart of a heifer
At the sound of a bullets bang
And the cry of a stab from a wolf’s fang
With the burns of the scorching vinegar
As the ashes fall from the broken cigar
Pour down the waters from up above
As the sweet victory and mercy of love
Can hum a tune of his last days about
As soon as the light from the candle blows out
Watches as his enemy falls down
Knowing Macduff has won the crown
On the ground, Macbeth lays
Thinking about his savage days
For there’s no sympathy...
#narrative
#WilliamShakespeare
738 reads
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the sex and violence of a metaphor

#dark
#erotic
#gothic
#death
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To Lady Macbeth
My darling wife
Who’s composure among madness was kept all too well
What am I to do
Forfeit the fate the merchants of destiny have sold me
Relinquish these visions of power
These visions of blood
Your passing smells the foulest of all my deeds
But fair is foul
And foul is fair
If this my love
Is my price for king and country
Then above all the madness surrounding the air
Evidence would say I have lost my mind
Should I not pursue
Should I not grab destiny by the throat
And I will run down all who oppose my right
I will turn all of...
Who’s composure among madness was kept all too well
What am I to do
Forfeit the fate the merchants of destiny have sold me
Relinquish these visions of power
These visions of blood
Your passing smells the foulest of all my deeds
But fair is foul
And foul is fair
If this my love
Is my price for king and country
Then above all the madness surrounding the air
Evidence would say I have lost my mind
Should I not pursue
Should I not grab destiny by the throat
And I will run down all who oppose my right
I will turn all of...
#WilliamShakespeare
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memento mori
you died..
just two words to say something undescribable,
mandatory and massive..
you died and i'm still here and the reason?
i won't know or maybe i don't want to know..
"you died" shakespeare wrote once
nothing more
nothing less
but it was enough..
*memento mori = remember you will die
† to my dearest 22/2/2010
just two words to say something undescribable,
mandatory and massive..
you died and i'm still here and the reason?
i won't know or maybe i don't want to know..
"you died" shakespeare wrote once
nothing more
nothing less
but it was enough..
*memento mori = remember you will die
† to my dearest 22/2/2010
#death
#WilliamShakespeare
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