Poems on William Shakespeare Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems on William Shakespeare seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
ThePalestRider
Poem Published
15th Aug 2024 2:00am
15th Aug 2024 2:00am
Night's Embrace
To thee I must confide a somber tale,
That shadows deep and dark do hold my heart
In twilight's grasp, where light and dreams unveil,
I dwell within the gloom, ne'er to depart
The night enfolds me in its velvet cloak,
Where phantoms drift and whispered secrets stay
Within the dusk, where once bright hopes are broke,
I find a refuge, far from light’s array
No sun’s embrace nor dawn’s inviting gleam,
Shall coax me forth from shadow’s hidden lair
In darkness’ grasp, my soul doth weave its dream,
And in the gloom, I...
That shadows deep and dark do hold my heart
In twilight's grasp, where light and dreams unveil,
I dwell within the gloom, ne'er to depart
The night enfolds me in its velvet cloak,
Where phantoms drift and whispered secrets stay
Within the dusk, where once bright hopes are broke,
I find a refuge, far from light’s array
No sun’s embrace nor dawn’s inviting gleam,
Shall coax me forth from shadow’s hidden lair
In darkness’ grasp, my soul doth weave its dream,
And in the gloom, I...
#dark
#rhyming
#scary
#SelfReflection
#WilliamShakespeare
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ThePalestRider
Poem Published
6th Aug 2024 10:10pm
6th Aug 2024 10:10pm
The Dark Between Hells
In realms 'twixt hells where shadows deep do dwell,
A place forsaken, ne'er by light adorned,
There lies a darkness darker than e'en Hell,
Where souls lament, by Heaven's grace forsworn.
No fiery pit, nor brimstone's searing flare,
But void eternal, still and void of sound,
Where echoes of despair do fill the air,
And restless spirits wander, lost, unbound.
In this abyss, 'twixt realms of doom and sin,
No hope doth shine, nor mercy doth descend,
For here the damned, their endless...
A place forsaken, ne'er by light adorned,
There lies a darkness darker than e'en Hell,
Where souls lament, by Heaven's grace forsworn.
No fiery pit, nor brimstone's searing flare,
But void eternal, still and void of sound,
Where echoes of despair do fill the air,
And restless spirits wander, lost, unbound.
In this abyss, 'twixt realms of doom and sin,
No hope doth shine, nor mercy doth descend,
For here the damned, their endless...
#heaven
#hell
#narrative
#religion
#WilliamShakespeare
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1 Comment
poetic_gawdess
Poem Published
3rd Jul 2024 6:08pm
3rd Jul 2024 6:08pm
Pomegranate Kisses
The light in me
craves the darkness in you.
The hint of lust in thine eyes,
tells me that you want me too.
We mustn’t waste time,
as we have none to spare.
Make haste to ye’ olde pomegranate tree,
and wait for me there.
Under the cloak of the night’s sky
we’ll be hidden in the dark.
Devouring each other,
under the blooming pomegranates,
until we hear the cry of the lark.
- Poetic Gawdess
craves the darkness in you.
The hint of lust in thine eyes,
tells me that you want me too.
We mustn’t waste time,
as we have none to spare.
Make haste to ye’ olde pomegranate tree,
and wait for me there.
Under the cloak of the night’s sky
we’ll be hidden in the dark.
Devouring each other,
under the blooming pomegranates,
until we hear the cry of the lark.
- Poetic Gawdess
#lover
#lust
#night
#sensual
#WilliamShakespeare
351 reads
7 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
21st Jun 2024 1:36am
21st Jun 2024 1:36am
more than theatre
as the globe burned
around him he thought, I need to go back to Anne, I’m
done with it all, I’ve done
all I can ..
around him he thought, I need to go back to Anne, I’m
done with it all, I’ve done
all I can ..
#WilliamShakespeare
106 reads
4 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
21st Feb 2024 00:53am
21st Feb 2024 00:53am
no one’s perfect
I love twelfth night, although I think
the treatment of malvolio is appalling
I love a midsummer nights dream although I think the depiction of the mechanicals is demeaning
I love shakeare, but not all of him
the treatment of malvolio is appalling
I love a midsummer nights dream although I think the depiction of the mechanicals is demeaning
I love shakeare, but not all of him
#WilliamShakespeare
#PopCulture
105 reads
5 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
11th May 2023 00:56am
11th May 2023 00:56am
life is theatre
ways out of the city were the
gates; he considered aldgate
as good as any other than
that he thought of new cross gate,
london bridge and the ferry
that would row you across
the river to southwark, to the globe, unimaginable escape ..
gates; he considered aldgate
as good as any other than
that he thought of new cross gate,
london bridge and the ferry
that would row you across
the river to southwark, to the globe, unimaginable escape ..
#WilliamShakespeare
185 reads
2 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
7th May 2023 5:11pm
7th May 2023 5:11pm
genius!
I mean, you won’t come up
with a better title for a romantic comedy than a midsummer
night’s dream all you like ..
with a better title for a romantic comedy than a midsummer
night’s dream all you like ..
#WilliamShakespeare
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1 Comment
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
6th May 2023 00:29am
6th May 2023 00:29am
feste on malvolio
no one
understood
what he was
saying
that bloke’s
a fool
stood up for him
saying
not at all
understood
what he was
saying
that bloke’s
a fool
stood up for him
saying
not at all
#WilliamShakespeare
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1 Comment
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
3rd May 2023 00:33am
3rd May 2023 00:33am
and, sat in the wings ..
I’ve seen many plays
at the globe, but the one
that sticks out was
a midsummer nights
dream, when we sat in
the wings of faerie ..
at the globe, but the one
that sticks out was
a midsummer nights
dream, when we sat in
the wings of faerie ..
#WilliamShakespeare
195 reads
1 Comment
Wafflenose
Ellie
Ellie
Poem Published
11th Nov 2022 9:23pm
11th Nov 2022 9:23pm
Mammering moldwarp
Fie! Yond distemperate, w'rkshy, bullying ov'rl'rd hast spoken.
Whilst t's most wondrous to treateth oth'rs with kindness
and repay evil with marry,
doth not alloweth yourself beest hath caught
being valorous f'r nay reward.
That flap-drag'n hast declar'd it presumptuous
to off'r holp wh're't did need.
One needeth to knoweth one's standing,
and to assisteth is to receiveth ideas above one's prov'rbial.
Th'ref're, shouldst a friend requesteth
thee transporteth an issue to their sakbut class
'r dropeth those folk at...
Whilst t's most wondrous to treateth oth'rs with kindness
and repay evil with marry,
doth not alloweth yourself beest hath caught
being valorous f'r nay reward.
That flap-drag'n hast declar'd it presumptuous
to off'r holp wh're't did need.
One needeth to knoweth one's standing,
and to assisteth is to receiveth ideas above one's prov'rbial.
Th'ref're, shouldst a friend requesteth
thee transporteth an issue to their sakbut class
'r dropeth those folk at...
#satirical
#frustration
#WilliamShakespeare
329 reads
8 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
24th Oct 2022 6:06am
24th Oct 2022 6:06am
ANNE HATH A WAY
Anne hath a way,
when in the hay,
to get her Bard
loving her hard,
shaking his spear
as they draw near
to seal, with kiss,
love's business.
when in the hay,
to get her Bard
loving her hard,
shaking his spear
as they draw near
to seal, with kiss,
love's business.
#rhyming
#funny
#WilliamShakespeare
395 reads
2 Comments
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
11th Sep 2022 4:46pm
11th Sep 2022 4:46pm
Readership
I’m more interested in readership than comments.
The readers don’t have to like my compositions.
I don’t have to answer questions about my poetry,
And neither do I have to respond to any comments.
Where is Shakespeare to answer questions from the readers?
Can anybody ask the writers of the Bible questions?
Frankly, I don’t care what people think about my work.
I write poetry as a hobby, not for financial benefits.
My main objective is to get readership for my poetry.
I get what I want, as long as people read the...
The readers don’t have to like my compositions.
I don’t have to answer questions about my poetry,
And neither do I have to respond to any comments.
Where is Shakespeare to answer questions from the readers?
Can anybody ask the writers of the Bible questions?
Frankly, I don’t care what people think about my work.
I write poetry as a hobby, not for financial benefits.
My main objective is to get readership for my poetry.
I get what I want, as long as people read the...
#myself
#WritingPoetry
#WilliamShakespeare #reading
#WilliamShakespeare #reading
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