Poems on William Shakespeare Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems on William Shakespeare seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Wafflenose
Ellie
Ellie
Poem Published
11th Nov 2022 9:23pm
11th Nov 2022 9:23pm
Mammering moldwarp
Fie! Yond distemperate, w'rkshy, bullying ov'rl'rd hast spoken.
Whilst t's most wondrous to treateth oth'rs with kindness
and repay evil with marry,
doth not alloweth yourself beest hath caught
being valorous f'r nay reward.
That flap-drag'n hast declar'd it presumptuous
to off'r holp wh're't did need.
One needeth to knoweth one's standing,
and to assisteth is to receiveth ideas above one's prov'rbial.
Th'ref're, shouldst a friend requesteth
thee transporteth an issue to their sakbut class
'r dropeth those folk at...
Whilst t's most wondrous to treateth oth'rs with kindness
and repay evil with marry,
doth not alloweth yourself beest hath caught
being valorous f'r nay reward.
That flap-drag'n hast declar'd it presumptuous
to off'r holp wh're't did need.
One needeth to knoweth one's standing,
and to assisteth is to receiveth ideas above one's prov'rbial.
Th'ref're, shouldst a friend requesteth
thee transporteth an issue to their sakbut class
'r dropeth those folk at...
#satirical
#frustration
#WilliamShakespeare
379 reads
8 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
24th Oct 2022 6:06am
24th Oct 2022 6:06am
ANNE HATH A WAY
Anne hath a way,
when in the hay,
to get her Bard
loving her hard,
shaking his spear
as they draw near
to seal, with kiss,
love's business.
when in the hay,
to get her Bard
loving her hard,
shaking his spear
as they draw near
to seal, with kiss,
love's business.
#rhyming
#funny
#WilliamShakespeare
451 reads
2 Comments
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
11th Sep 2022 4:46pm
11th Sep 2022 4:46pm
Readership
I’m more interested in readership than comments.
The readers don’t have to like my compositions.
I don’t have to answer questions about my poetry,
And neither do I have to respond to any comments.
Where is Shakespeare to answer questions from the readers?
Can anybody ask the writers of the Bible questions?
Frankly, I don’t care what people think about my work.
I write poetry as a hobby, not for financial benefits.
My main objective is to get readership for my poetry.
I get what I want, as long as people read the...
The readers don’t have to like my compositions.
I don’t have to answer questions about my poetry,
And neither do I have to respond to any comments.
Where is Shakespeare to answer questions from the readers?
Can anybody ask the writers of the Bible questions?
Frankly, I don’t care what people think about my work.
I write poetry as a hobby, not for financial benefits.
My main objective is to get readership for my poetry.
I get what I want, as long as people read the...
#myself
#WritingPoetry
#WilliamShakespeare #reading
#WilliamShakespeare #reading
393 reads
3 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
22nd Dec 2021 2:02am
22nd Dec 2021 2:02am
the same page
I dare say will was right,
the whole world’s a
stage, but
it’s closed down for
tonight due
to plague which,
even in his own time was
all the rage
the whole world’s a
stage, but
it’s closed down for
tonight due
to plague which,
even in his own time was
all the rage
#WilliamShakespeare
346 reads
2 Comments
LilDragonFly
Poem Published
5th Apr 2021 10:16am
5th Apr 2021 10:16am
Little Ado About Everything
Much Ado About Nothing" ~ William Shakespeare
I do believe dear Will
misused his quill
when he wrote the line
to title his play
At least for modern times
where we avoid all rhymes
living instead
in this most prosaic life
Spending our stale days
in cursory ways
changing our screens
pretending to multitask
Getting all we ask
or so we still think
as we continue to drink
the post modernist potion
Never visiting the ocean
to usher in the dawn
refuse to remain a pawn ...
I do believe dear Will
misused his quill
when he wrote the line
to title his play
At least for modern times
where we avoid all rhymes
living instead
in this most prosaic life
Spending our stale days
in cursory ways
changing our screens
pretending to multitask
Getting all we ask
or so we still think
as we continue to drink
the post modernist potion
Never visiting the ocean
to usher in the dawn
refuse to remain a pawn ...
#anxiety
#LifeStruggles
#confessional
#WritingPoetry
#WilliamShakespeare
22 reads
9 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
23rd Dec 2020 11:50pm
23rd Dec 2020 11:50pm
despite or because
he wrote some of his
greatest plays during the plague years ago that was
greatest plays during the plague years ago that was
#WilliamShakespeare
517 reads
2 Comments
brokentitanium
k.
k.
Poem Published
24th May 2020 3:25am
24th May 2020 3:25am
Daily visitor
Every morning, sometimes afternoon too,
taps on the glass
Tap-tap-tap, tap-tap
Drives the dogs crazy
Sits on the clothesline or a branch,
sings a beautiful little song
How can I resist...
I don't have birdseed
but he enjoys a little pinch of oats
I'm starting to look forward to his visits
I know it won't go on forever
but he's mine for now
so he needs a name
Was going to call him Romeo,
but he died from poison
-- My Shakespeare's not great,
I had to google --
With that dripping blood on his chest
I...
taps on the glass
Tap-tap-tap, tap-tap
Drives the dogs crazy
Sits on the clothesline or a branch,
sings a beautiful little song
How can I resist...
I don't have birdseed
but he enjoys a little pinch of oats
I'm starting to look forward to his visits
I know it won't go on forever
but he's mine for now
so he needs a name
Was going to call him Romeo,
but he died from poison
-- My Shakespeare's not great,
I had to google --
With that dripping blood on his chest
I...
#happiness
#birds
#WilliamShakespeare
446 reads
13 Comments
Brokenpoet2020
Poem Published
21st Apr 2020 9:13pm
21st Apr 2020 9:13pm
Bars of the Bard
Nothing is either good or bad
But it is thinking that makes it so”
Bars of the Bard, resonate,
Kinetic energy flow.
The ripple is only a fleeting reaction
To the cycle underneath.
How you feel is just a perception,
Projection, to daily reality.
The problem is not a problem;
It’s a situation and response.
How you feel about it is the problem;
Your, emotional intelligence.
Feelin ‘bout thinkin
An thinkin ‘bout feelin..
Responding from places lacking in healing.
The bard hit me hard, with a lesson for life, ...
But it is thinking that makes it so”
Bars of the Bard, resonate,
Kinetic energy flow.
The ripple is only a fleeting reaction
To the cycle underneath.
How you feel is just a perception,
Projection, to daily reality.
The problem is not a problem;
It’s a situation and response.
How you feel about it is the problem;
Your, emotional intelligence.
Feelin ‘bout thinkin
An thinkin ‘bout feelin..
Responding from places lacking in healing.
The bard hit me hard, with a lesson for life, ...
#learning
#SelfDiscovery
#WilliamShakespeare
#healing
#NaPoWriMo2020
545 reads
0 Comments
russell_snow
Poem Published
30th Jan 2020 5:50pm
30th Jan 2020 5:50pm
Special Moments
I see her smiling by a willow branch
Where shadows long and twist
and touch her skin
Where words can sink in ways
in which I can't
Those sweeter thoughts; yet warn me
dreams will end
So forth my eyes of tortured
purple dress
Belong the days among the leaves
of spring
To bloom the flowers wild and soft caress
The hands that tear apart
my paper wings
I picture all the times we couldn't see
The dark behind the pillars
lust and greed
So taking every day by day to free
The long lost lover deep inside of...
Where shadows long and twist
and touch her skin
Where words can sink in ways
in which I can't
Those sweeter thoughts; yet warn me
dreams will end
So forth my eyes of tortured
purple dress
Belong the days among the leaves
of spring
To bloom the flowers wild and soft caress
The hands that tear apart
my paper wings
I picture all the times we couldn't see
The dark behind the pillars
lust and greed
So taking every day by day to free
The long lost lover deep inside of...
#regret
#relationships
#forgiveness
#separation
#WilliamShakespeare
322 reads
2 Comments
De420
Poem Published
7th Dec 2019 6:31pm
7th Dec 2019 6:31pm
Imagine that!
If every one in the world can contribute what a world this would be indeed, right!? you just need to believe, even changing yourself, just that is something not to be feared! SO start with that, with this small world of yours cuz what did michael jackson say but to look at the man in the mirror and if you wanna change the world start with your self first and it should be done with thirst
like a vampire ready to bust with blood that you imbursed.
this opportunity to change the world by changing yourself first
Start at a minute micro cosmic level and you will see a change! we...
like a vampire ready to bust with blood that you imbursed.
this opportunity to change the world by changing yourself first
Start at a minute micro cosmic level and you will see a change! we...
#freedom
#art
#WilliamShakespeare
#responsibility
#passion
489 reads
0 Comments
dkzksaxxas_DanielX
Poem Published
5th Oct 2019 6:47pm
5th Oct 2019 6:47pm
Bring Some Thing to Sustain The Ghost of a King ! / A Taste of Yorick puddin'
Did I didn't ?
or,
did he do? ( it? )
Ah, a slapiddy face will do for right now,
as publicOpiniion moves to
jellify the corporate nose pickin' into
a ticklin'n;multiColoured
tasty newconfeXion
toward the slip'slobberin slide on Helsinger highway.
Here, dear Hamlet's ham-handed handling of his host,
the ghosty KingBigDaddy,
couldn't be as similar to a slipknot, as mule meat is to
chewing gum.
So...
or,
did he do? ( it? )
Ah, a slapiddy face will do for right now,
as publicOpiniion moves to
jellify the corporate nose pickin' into
a ticklin'n;multiColoured
tasty newconfeXion
toward the slip'slobberin slide on Helsinger highway.
Here, dear Hamlet's ham-handed handling of his host,
the ghosty KingBigDaddy,
couldn't be as similar to a slipknot, as mule meat is to
chewing gum.
So...
#depression
#conflict
#death
#spiritual
#WilliamShakespeare
410 reads
3 Comments
shannonJane
Poem Published
6th Aug 2019 1:08am
6th Aug 2019 1:08am
The war isn't over
I'm so scared.
Alot to learn.
Body frozen.
Learning.
Nostolgic.
Releasing an old me.
Nostalgia..
As it burns in to history.
I'm scared.
Battle ready.
Alot to learn.
Body frozen.
Learning.
Nostolgic.
Releasing an old me.
Nostalgia..
As it burns in to history.
I'm scared.
Battle ready.
#WilliamShakespeare
376 reads
0 Comments
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