Valentines Day Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#ValentinesDay
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
18th Feb 2023 7:14am
18th Feb 2023 7:14am
BE YOUR VALENTINE? OH YES!
To be your Valentine?
I would not say No,
I will come to you, wrapped....
just untie the bow.....
Imagination
I leave you to decide
how far you will go
to take what's inside.
I would not say No,
I will come to you, wrapped....
just untie the bow.....
Imagination
I leave you to decide
how far you will go
to take what's inside.
#erotic
#ValentinesDay
#rhyming #seductive
#rhyming #seductive
474 reads
7 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
14th Feb 2023 1:49pm
14th Feb 2023 1:49pm
Apiary Nights!
I entertained Cupid's standard dream
Saint Valentine induced in me
Where both were drinking Bailey's cream...
And celebrating amity.
They had careers and sexy wives
And perfect homes in heaven above
For spying on our mortal lives...
Of overcomplicated love.
Every day they would conspire
To clog the web with another post
About blue pills for more desire
From the father, son, and holy ghost.
But all the while what went unmarked
Was what...
Saint Valentine induced in me
Where both were drinking Bailey's cream...
And celebrating amity.
They had careers and sexy wives
And perfect homes in heaven above
For spying on our mortal lives...
Of overcomplicated love.
Every day they would conspire
To clog the web with another post
About blue pills for more desire
From the father, son, and holy ghost.
But all the while what went unmarked
Was what...
#love
#ValentinesDay
#bees
247 reads
0 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
14th Feb 2023 00:06am
14th Feb 2023 00:06am
Looking for my gorgeous Valentine
#love
#lust
#ValentinesDay
387 reads
4 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
11th Feb 2023 11:18pm
11th Feb 2023 11:18pm
If I Was Cupid...
If I was Cupid…
I’d make two of the most hateful manliest homophobes
Feel something for each other in their souls
So that their core beliefs would rock in their foundations
And that their erections couldn’t be controlled
Whenever they looked into each other’s eyes
If I was Cupid…
I’d make two people from different faiths and creeds
Who have hatred and bigotry for each other’s cultures
Fall in love to the point they couldn’t stand to be apart
So that they would realize religion doesn’t really count
When it comes to matters...
I’d make two of the most hateful manliest homophobes
Feel something for each other in their souls
So that their core beliefs would rock in their foundations
And that their erections couldn’t be controlled
Whenever they looked into each other’s eyes
If I was Cupid…
I’d make two people from different faiths and creeds
Who have hatred and bigotry for each other’s cultures
Fall in love to the point they couldn’t stand to be apart
So that they would realize religion doesn’t really count
When it comes to matters...
#love
#romantic
#ValentinesDay #funny
#ValentinesDay #funny
440 reads
10 Comments
Weak4hissmile
Poem Published
14th Feb 2022 6:45am
14th Feb 2022 6:45am
victima suae risus
Note.
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.before I begin id like to explain
This is a tale of a one-sided confession
A confession one could never admit to
Normally.around those near .
But a loophole of a publication and a website link written on paper
Given in the night hour before valentines day of a crush that admittance could alienate a friendship .
But no regrets for good or for goodbye
He must know he makes a girl see mofe than jusy horror in the male species...he's one of the good guys.
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.before I begin id like to explain
This is a tale of a one-sided confession
A confession one could never admit to
Normally.around those near .
But a loophole of a publication and a website link written on paper
Given in the night hour before valentines day of a crush that admittance could alienate a friendship .
But no regrets for good or for goodbye
He must know he makes a girl see mofe than jusy horror in the male species...he's one of the good guys.
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.
...
#crush
#LGBT
#ValentinesDay
#confessional
#UnrequitedLove
515 reads
8 Comments
MrDunnePoetry
Poem Published
8th Feb 2022 5:12pm
8th Feb 2022 5:12pm
Everlasting Passion
Everlasting Passion"
(My dedication to Hip-hop Music)
It got to the point, that I had nothing to lose/
So I made a choice, to do the things that I do
I fought and I fought, yet I never thought it through/
But now I can see a future, and that futures in you
You slew blue with your beauty, making cute out of the vile/
I can see the truth in your eyes, and in your beautiful smile
I used to be so brokenhearted, I didn't know who to trust/
I so yearned to let it burn, and now it's all ashes and dust
Now that misery has departed, it's...
(My dedication to Hip-hop Music)
It got to the point, that I had nothing to lose/
So I made a choice, to do the things that I do
I fought and I fought, yet I never thought it through/
But now I can see a future, and that futures in you
You slew blue with your beauty, making cute out of the vile/
I can see the truth in your eyes, and in your beautiful smile
I used to be so brokenhearted, I didn't know who to trust/
I so yearned to let it burn, and now it's all ashes and dust
Now that misery has departed, it's...
#love
#ILoveYou
#ValentinesDay
#music
#rap
986 reads
1 Comment
Pinkdreams
Poem Published
24th Jan 2022 6:06pm
24th Jan 2022 6:06pm
Isn't it (Not) Romantic?
i am a woman
and I don't like the word 'romantic'
sorry Hallmark
sure, i like some things
that are 'romantic'
the color pink (light pink, silvery pink)
lace
beaches
holding hands
kisses
massages
love
but i dislike the fundamentalism
of the word 'romantic'
with its mandated Valentines Days
pre-conceived notions
expectations
disappointment
budget-breaking engagement rings
bridezillas ("my special day is ruined!")
and many 'shoulds'
i once happily shared...
and I don't like the word 'romantic'
sorry Hallmark
sure, i like some things
that are 'romantic'
the color pink (light pink, silvery pink)
lace
beaches
holding hands
kisses
massages
love
but i dislike the fundamentalism
of the word 'romantic'
with its mandated Valentines Days
pre-conceived notions
expectations
disappointment
budget-breaking engagement rings
bridezillas ("my special day is ruined!")
and many 'shoulds'
i once happily shared...
#love
#relationships
#ValentinesDay
#culture
#tradition
625 reads
9 Comments
4Her411
Poem Published
1st Jul 2021 1:13am
1st Jul 2021 1:13am
she ask me not to
she ask me not to
do not compare me to a rose
their value is over blown
there bought every week
for to many reasons
there nothing special you see
you say I am unique
and rose are just ordinary
it's the time and thought
not by the price it was bought
how well do you know me
it's carnations you love to see
you favorite is cream and cinnamon
one or twenty makes on difference you see
it's the thought that counts
so I by them out of the blue
to show my love for you
not because society says its time
do not compare me to a rose
their value is over blown
there bought every week
for to many reasons
there nothing special you see
you say I am unique
and rose are just ordinary
it's the time and thought
not by the price it was bought
how well do you know me
it's carnations you love to see
you favorite is cream and cinnamon
one or twenty makes on difference you see
it's the thought that counts
so I by them out of the blue
to show my love for you
not because society says its time
#romantic
#ILoveYou
#ValentinesDay
#sensual
#passion
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NANCY_RDZ_STORIES
Poem Published
15th Feb 2021 5:41am
15th Feb 2021 5:41am
MY VALENTINE
My Valentine
Who will be mine?
I'm in between an invisible Iine
Not moving left or right
My heart that beats perfectly fine
Yet no man that hits my light
My Valentine
What itches my spine?
Hybrid roses vine
That changes and churns into sweet red wine
Rum honey sopapillas that sweetly combine
My tongue can't resist my saliva starts to shine
My Valentine
A dessert is better than a man
Romance shows in the sweet bite in luxury dine
Wanting his attention while he changes his plan
A kiss that soon will...
Who will be mine?
I'm in between an invisible Iine
Not moving left or right
My heart that beats perfectly fine
Yet no man that hits my light
My Valentine
What itches my spine?
Hybrid roses vine
That changes and churns into sweet red wine
Rum honey sopapillas that sweetly combine
My tongue can't resist my saliva starts to shine
My Valentine
A dessert is better than a man
Romance shows in the sweet bite in luxury dine
Wanting his attention while he changes his plan
A kiss that soon will...
#ValentinesDay
#holiday
646 reads
13 Comments
cabcool
Poem Published
15th Feb 2021 3:31am
15th Feb 2021 3:31am
my perfect valentine
There is always some madness in love, but there is always
also some reason in madness.”—Friedrich Nietzsche
For my Beloved Wife
it may not be a perfect love
yet it is genuine
of all the treasures from above
no gift is so divine
as knowing that your heart is mine
though all the world were dead
you are my perfect valentine
none else can take your stead
a guarantee of perfect days
eludes the strongest will
yet do i promise you always
that though the moon stand still
when day is...
also some reason in madness.”—Friedrich Nietzsche
For my Beloved Wife
it may not be a perfect love
yet it is genuine
of all the treasures from above
no gift is so divine
as knowing that your heart is mine
though all the world were dead
you are my perfect valentine
none else can take your stead
a guarantee of perfect days
eludes the strongest will
yet do i promise you always
that though the moon stand still
when day is...
#wife
#romantic
#ILoveYou #ValentinesDay
#ILoveYou #ValentinesDay
636 reads
4 Comments
FeNyX
Poem Published
14th Feb 2021 7:09pm
14th Feb 2021 7:09pm
Felt Love
The look you give when you lock eyes
The breath you hold when she moves close
The flutter that ripples through when alone
The helpless surrender when her smile glows
The breath you hold when she moves close
The flutter that ripples through when alone
The helpless surrender when her smile glows
#love
#ValentinesDay
14 reads
4 Comments
DaVinci_07
Leo
Leo
Poem Published
14th Feb 2021 5:33pm
14th Feb 2021 5:33pm
Cupid Multi-Lingual
If there has been an oversight and you have not been wished a Happy Valentines' Day, may one of the wishes below, in a tongue you understand, find its mark like cupid's arrow. I correct the oversight and wish you a [ Insert applicable line from below ].
If you have been wished already, in addition, please accept my wish for a Happy Valentines' Day.
And, as a lovely lady of DUP, if ok with you, consider yourself given by me a COVID safe virtual hug and kiss; a small, gift-wrapped box of your favorite chocolates / candy; a red rose; and a champagne toast. ...
If you have been wished already, in addition, please accept my wish for a Happy Valentines' Day.
And, as a lovely lady of DUP, if ok with you, consider yourself given by me a COVID safe virtual hug and kiss; a small, gift-wrapped box of your favorite chocolates / candy; a red rose; and a champagne toast. ...
#love
#relationships
#romantic
#admiration
#ValentinesDay
730 reads
6 Comments
DU Poetry : Valentines Day Seeking Honest Critique Poems
