Poems About Thrill Seeking Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about thrill seeking seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
15th Nov 2024 6:42pm
15th Nov 2024 6:42pm
We were both married so screwing was a no go ..
That lasted about 2 drinks
Then innocence took a back seat
City Life is a meat grinder
You can tenderize and flame
Some like her well done
I took her medium with luscious pink
Bukowski was at the table in the corner
Hunter S. Thompson too
Wasted in the smokey dark heat
Comparing poetry and fright
I was at home with Sha Sha
Lou Reed stopped by to say hello
She didn't say much
Her English was a vacancy
We communicated in shy glances
Touched each other in places...
Then innocence took a back seat
City Life is a meat grinder
You can tenderize and flame
Some like her well done
I took her medium with luscious pink
Bukowski was at the table in the corner
Hunter S. Thompson too
Wasted in the smokey dark heat
Comparing poetry and fright
I was at home with Sha Sha
Lou Reed stopped by to say hello
She didn't say much
Her English was a vacancy
We communicated in shy glances
Touched each other in places...
#alcohol
#PopCulture
#risk
#temptation
#ThrillSeeking
177 reads
26 Comments
moon_bather
Poem Published
14th Nov 2024 5:39am
14th Nov 2024 5:39am
Future Ben
Oh, I’m gonna pay for it tomorrow
No question
No doubt
It’s here, my pain
I’m gonna pay for it
Tomorrow
No question
No doubt
It’s here, my pain
I’m gonna pay for it
Tomorrow
#addiction
#alcohol
#emptiness
#LifeAsAWriter
#ThrillSeeking
99 reads
1 Comment
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
13th Nov 2024 9:59pm
13th Nov 2024 9:59pm
Field and Stream
In Lego-like snap tight word precision
I find that some to logic are immune
and incapable of bard concision
with their characters so rustically hewn
to typecast themselves with a bumpkin pride
that hunts and fishes the motorsport way
into a future where eloquence died
along with students in a bullet spray,
and then they only act to think and pray
and blame the horror show on mental health
because they WANT all the havoc to stay
in their rapacity for commonwealth
fueled by a hatred of those schools
where their...
I find that some to logic are immune
and incapable of bard concision
with their characters so rustically hewn
to typecast themselves with a bumpkin pride
that hunts and fishes the motorsport way
into a future where eloquence died
along with students in a bullet spray,
and then they only act to think and pray
and blame the horror show on mental health
because they WANT all the havoc to stay
in their rapacity for commonwealth
fueled by a hatred of those schools
where their...
#BDSM
#FeelingTrapped
#reading #ThrillSeeking
#reading #ThrillSeeking
173 reads
7 Comments
Duice
Poem Published
9th Nov 2024 9:27pm
9th Nov 2024 9:27pm
The Ultimate Cure (Part 2)
K][N][O][W] [T][H][Y] [S][E][L][F]
entering Enlightened ancient knowledge learning zone
What’s good for the Goose is lost for the Gander
to each temple [Understand] Hertz of its very own
Om chant Meditation seems to be practice
of putting your brain in tranquil aurora vegetative state
My avatar Aura uproots chakra 852 Hz frequency different
[ground beast] [all Beef] [no chase] [no hesitate]
Snatched raven(ous) out my life-suit to cloud thought tangent
Judas Clashed over a Quest(ionable) 3rd eye
30 second Yoga...
entering Enlightened ancient knowledge learning zone
What’s good for the Goose is lost for the Gander
to each temple [Understand] Hertz of its very own
Om chant Meditation seems to be practice
of putting your brain in tranquil aurora vegetative state
My avatar Aura uproots chakra 852 Hz frequency different
[ground beast] [all Beef] [no chase] [no hesitate]
Snatched raven(ous) out my life-suit to cloud thought tangent
Judas Clashed over a Quest(ionable) 3rd eye
30 second Yoga...
#conflict
#ThrillSeeking
#Hindu
#wisdom
#angels
211 reads
6 Comments
Whackytraveler
Poem Published
26th Oct 2024 6:01am
26th Oct 2024 6:01am
Take me out for a drive
Life’s too crazy
Baby, take me out for a drive
To a place I feel more alive
I like the ocean
And sand
I love to dance
Take me out
Into town
Turn this old frown
Upside down
I’m in a frenzy
Baby, take me out for a drive
To a place I feel more alive
I like the ocean
And sand
I love to dance
Take me out
Into town
Turn this old frown
Upside down
I’m in a frenzy
#freedom
#passion
#ThrillSeeking
62 reads
0 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
17th Oct 2024 8:01am
17th Oct 2024 8:01am
Taking a tablet
Taking a tablet for misinformation
Morning routine first thing take a tablet
Settles the acid in the stomach of my soul
Later on after a hard workout
Soak in Epsom salts
To heal my wounds
After dinner tension headache is
Two Excedrin do the trick
Soothes tired muscles
After we watch tv and she falls asleep
Pick up my tablet of misinformation
Go down many rabbit holes
Pulling on threads that just unwind
Facts set out like a puzzle
As a thread ends another begins
See some...
Morning routine first thing take a tablet
Settles the acid in the stomach of my soul
Later on after a hard workout
Soak in Epsom salts
To heal my wounds
After dinner tension headache is
Two Excedrin do the trick
Soothes tired muscles
After we watch tv and she falls asleep
Pick up my tablet of misinformation
Go down many rabbit holes
Pulling on threads that just unwind
Facts set out like a puzzle
As a thread ends another begins
See some...
#freedom
#mountains
#sky #ThrillSeeking
#sky #ThrillSeeking
63 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
28th Sep 2024 7:28pm
28th Sep 2024 7:28pm
Whoever Loses, Wins
The Beatles have a song on their "White Album" "Happiness is a warm gun"
It should have been titled
Happiness is a loaded gun
A gun that's loaded can be many things:
Friend
Enemy
Defender
Victim
Murderer
Why don't you come and stay awhile
We'll have a friendly game of Russian Roulette
Whoever loses, wins
It should have been titled
Happiness is a loaded gun
A gun that's loaded can be many things:
Friend
Enemy
Defender
Victim
Murderer
Why don't you come and stay awhile
We'll have a friendly game of Russian Roulette
Whoever loses, wins
#SelfHarm
#suicide
#ThrillSeeking
#tragedy
#violence
230 reads
10 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
27th Sep 2024 11:41am
27th Sep 2024 11:41am
Carnival of the Wicked
"Ladies and gentlemen, boys and girls, step right up for the spectacle you’ve all been waiting for, as tonight, we celebrate The Wretched And The Damned! Get ready to experience the most frightening night of all, hide your kids whether big or small. Brace yourselves and open your eyes people, welcome to the CARNIVAL OF THE WICKED".
BEHOLD
The freaks of nature taking all control
STAND UP
For the show you’ve all been waiting for
LAUGHTER
Is filling up the creepy marquee
FIRE
The fire breathers heating up the stage
...
BEHOLD
The freaks of nature taking all control
STAND UP
For the show you’ve all been waiting for
LAUGHTER
Is filling up the creepy marquee
FIRE
The fire breathers heating up the stage
...
#dark
#evil
#fiction
#nightmares
#ThrillSeeking
85 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
17th Sep 2024 10:16pm
17th Sep 2024 10:16pm
Dodge Swinger
Hey lady, are you going my way?
Hop in, there's nothing more to say
We'll find a spot underneath the moon
Sit back and we'll listen to some tunes
You'll experience the universe & stars
Plastic Jesus on the dash of my car
Jupiter cyclops is waiting for you
I'll push the seat back for you to get a better view
We hit drive through the tail of the comet
I have a bag, in case you need to vomit
Whenever it feels right
Galaxy 500, faster then the speed of light
Hop in, there's nothing more to say
We'll find a spot underneath the moon
Sit back and we'll listen to some tunes
You'll experience the universe & stars
Plastic Jesus on the dash of my car
Jupiter cyclops is waiting for you
I'll push the seat back for you to get a better view
We hit drive through the tail of the comet
I have a bag, in case you need to vomit
Whenever it feels right
Galaxy 500, faster then the speed of light
#cars
#friendship
#rhyming
#ThrillSeeking
#universe
81 reads
3 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
10th Sep 2024 1:28pm
10th Sep 2024 1:28pm
Deck of Cards (Collab With Duice)
Splitting chakra checkered card
deck reveals a big Joker of hearts
Aligned to be circus clown renown in mastery
to circles in aerial misdirection of arts
A bachelor of scholar in jester
to whimsical false degree starts
Unbalanced on high-rise thread walks
that net catch wild reaction remarks
Cannon fodder for fun launched
on explosions blown sky high
A cardinal jeered by child eyes
or mohawk birdie sky draws nigh...
deck reveals a big Joker of hearts
Aligned to be circus clown renown in mastery
to circles in aerial misdirection of arts
A bachelor of scholar in jester
to whimsical false degree starts
Unbalanced on high-rise thread walks
that net catch wild reaction remarks
Cannon fodder for fun launched
on explosions blown sky high
A cardinal jeered by child eyes
or mohawk birdie sky draws nigh...
#inspirational
#misunderstood
#ThrillSeeking #collaboration
#ThrillSeeking #collaboration
182 reads
10 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
29th Aug 2024 11:25am
29th Aug 2024 11:25am
Coulrophobia
Dress up as a clown
Clowns create hysteria
Bring fear to your friends
Clowns create hysteria
Bring fear to your friends
#anxiety
#fear
#satirical
#senryu
#ThrillSeeking
86 reads
8 Comments
KrumblyKrumb16
Poem Published
30th Jul 2024 9:58am
30th Jul 2024 9:58am
I lie awake
Oh, how I can't wait,
To grow up into the things,
That bring my nightmares.
To grow up into the things,
That bring my nightmares.
#fear
#senryu
#ThrillSeeking
89 reads
1 Comment
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