Poems About Thrill Seeking Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about thrill seeking seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
14th Apr 2025 00:52am
14th Apr 2025 00:52am
Galaxy 500
Hey lady, are you going my way?
Hop in, there's nothing more to say
We'll find a spot underneath the moon
Sit back and we'll listen to some tunes
You'll experience the universe & stars
Plastic Jesus on the dash of my car
Jupiter, Neptune are waiting for you
I'll push the seat back for you to get a better view
We hit drive through the tail of the comet
I have a bag, in case you need to vomit
Whenever it feels right
Galaxy 500, faster then the speed of light
Hop in, there's nothing more to say
We'll find a spot underneath the moon
Sit back and we'll listen to some tunes
You'll experience the universe & stars
Plastic Jesus on the dash of my car
Jupiter, Neptune are waiting for you
I'll push the seat back for you to get a better view
We hit drive through the tail of the comet
I have a bag, in case you need to vomit
Whenever it feels right
Galaxy 500, faster then the speed of light
#cars
#friendship
#rhyming
#ThrillSeeking
#universe
74 reads
10 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
28th Mar 2025 7:48pm
28th Mar 2025 7:48pm
There's No Place Like Home
Do you like my investigation?
Is it going well?
I think we should bring the Feds in,
On this whole goddamn town!
All the guys at registers,
Are staring me down.
The police never care,
If I'm fucking around.
They like to watch.
They like to listen.
Should we make them stop?
It's hard to be distant.
Ill investigate,
The situation.
You just sit back and watch,
I appreciate your participation :)
Is it going well?
I think we should bring the Feds in,
On this whole goddamn town!
All the guys at registers,
Are staring me down.
The police never care,
If I'm fucking around.
They like to watch.
They like to listen.
Should we make them stop?
It's hard to be distant.
Ill investigate,
The situation.
You just sit back and watch,
I appreciate your participation :)
#funny
#porn
#ThrillSeeking
122 reads
12 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
3rd Mar 2025 8:55pm
3rd Mar 2025 8:55pm
Sarcasm
When I spread rumors about myself,
And other people can't figure me out.
They laugh at me, drunk on pride.
While I'm dancing to their pathetic lies.
I love the attention I get each time.
These idiots think they're in my mind
My feelings they can never find,
Cause it's too fun to leave them behind.
Now, let's start some rumors.
Let's hand them out.
And watch the fake people run around.
And laugh at how they ponder about,
How I know exactly when to call them out.
I love their lies, and there are plenty. ...
And other people can't figure me out.
They laugh at me, drunk on pride.
While I'm dancing to their pathetic lies.
I love the attention I get each time.
These idiots think they're in my mind
My feelings they can never find,
Cause it's too fun to leave them behind.
Now, let's start some rumors.
Let's hand them out.
And watch the fake people run around.
And laugh at how they ponder about,
How I know exactly when to call them out.
I love their lies, and there are plenty. ...
#secrets
#ThrillSeeking
#TruthOfLife
124 reads
11 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
28th Feb 2025 5:03pm
28th Feb 2025 5:03pm
Strip For Me
I got me a lap dance.
Don't need to try,
To get in her pants.
They're gone.
And I'm just there,
For the big and brawn.
Sipping this martini,
Enjoying the porn.
Can't wait for this horny guy,
To come and join.
We'll gamble 'til the light of dawn.
Who gets the dance?
We'll flip a coin.
Ill mind fuck him,
While she gets him on.
He's distracted,
So I know I've won.
Now let's get going.
The sun is out.
Let's do a dance, at your house.
Id love to whip these titties out. ...
Don't need to try,
To get in her pants.
They're gone.
And I'm just there,
For the big and brawn.
Sipping this martini,
Enjoying the porn.
Can't wait for this horny guy,
To come and join.
We'll gamble 'til the light of dawn.
Who gets the dance?
We'll flip a coin.
Ill mind fuck him,
While she gets him on.
He's distracted,
So I know I've won.
Now let's get going.
The sun is out.
Let's do a dance, at your house.
Id love to whip these titties out. ...
#funny
#holiday
#ThrillSeeking #vulnerability
#ThrillSeeking #vulnerability
206 reads
12 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
23rd Feb 2025 3:53pm
23rd Feb 2025 3:53pm
Sunday Morning
#death
#erotic
#sex
#ThrillSeeking
#violence
133 reads
12 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
21st Feb 2025 11:05pm
21st Feb 2025 11:05pm
The Start Of A Great Weekend
I looked out my window just before
On the other side of the street
I saw a man put a gun to a dog's head and blow the dog's brains all over the place
He bought his kid out next, placed the gun to his temple and shot his tiny head all over his driveway
Personally, I think it's alright
The kid was constantly shitting on my lawn and the dog was making way too much noise
Good Riddance!
On the other side of the street
I saw a man put a gun to a dog's head and blow the dog's brains all over the place
He bought his kid out next, placed the gun to his temple and shot his tiny head all over his driveway
Personally, I think it's alright
The kid was constantly shitting on my lawn and the dog was making way too much noise
Good Riddance!
#family
#happiness
#LifeChangingMoment
#satirical
#ThrillSeeking
111 reads
6 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
21st Feb 2025 2:52am
21st Feb 2025 2:52am
Spam After 10pm
Can I spam call you tonight?
Ill be polite.
Ask what you're wearing.
Make you a sweet deal.
You're the queen of England,
And I'm Aladdin making a steal.
I got all your jewels and treasures,
By sinking ships,
Causing oil spills.
I'm not a pirate.
Everything I say is real!
My code of conduct,
Is investing in the way you feel.
I hope you're lonely.
So I can spam call you tonight.
Ill get you moaning,
For useless products that you buy!
I'm really good at talking,
the way you like!...
Ill be polite.
Ask what you're wearing.
Make you a sweet deal.
You're the queen of England,
And I'm Aladdin making a steal.
I got all your jewels and treasures,
By sinking ships,
Causing oil spills.
I'm not a pirate.
Everything I say is real!
My code of conduct,
Is investing in the way you feel.
I hope you're lonely.
So I can spam call you tonight.
Ill get you moaning,
For useless products that you buy!
I'm really good at talking,
the way you like!...
#ThrillSeeking
190 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
19th Feb 2025 8:22pm
19th Feb 2025 8:22pm
Titillation
Short is life
Filled with things
Who knows what for
I'll never earn my wings
I think I fulfilled my knowledge
By the age of nine
I guess I could better myself
If I could expand my mind
Some new kind of thrill
Need what I ain't had
Some new kind of rush
I need to go crazy mad
Like a child sucks their mom
Like your daughter eating Jill
This guy needs
Some new kind of thrill
I'm looking, I'm searching
I want something never had before
I'm looking, I'm searching
Something greater...
Filled with things
Who knows what for
I'll never earn my wings
I think I fulfilled my knowledge
By the age of nine
I guess I could better myself
If I could expand my mind
Some new kind of thrill
Need what I ain't had
Some new kind of rush
I need to go crazy mad
Like a child sucks their mom
Like your daughter eating Jill
This guy needs
Some new kind of thrill
I'm looking, I'm searching
I want something never had before
I'm looking, I'm searching
Something greater...
#rhyming
#ThrillSeeking
97 reads
10 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
16th Feb 2025 2:03pm
16th Feb 2025 2:03pm
The Carnival Bizarre
Dissecting the spectacle
limbless woman with tentacles
contortionists jump on trampolines
masturbating in your wet dreams
Clowns perform, drunk with sorrow
fortunes read, no more tomorrow’s
freaks shock as you watch in awe
kids frightened running towards the door
Threw-up up food after some rides
sawdust, lysol, you feel like your gonna die
at last, the show is about to begin
large audience, the lights turned dim
Animals dance, balance, and sway
lion tamer controls, keeping them at bay
cigar tossed as a...
limbless woman with tentacles
contortionists jump on trampolines
masturbating in your wet dreams
Clowns perform, drunk with sorrow
fortunes read, no more tomorrow’s
freaks shock as you watch in awe
kids frightened running towards the door
Threw-up up food after some rides
sawdust, lysol, you feel like your gonna die
at last, the show is about to begin
large audience, the lights turned dim
Animals dance, balance, and sway
lion tamer controls, keeping them at bay
cigar tossed as a...
#dreams
#happiness
#nightmares
#rhyming
#ThrillSeeking
125 reads
14 Comments
Billy_Snagg
Jizzman
Jizzman
Poem Published
14th Feb 2025 11:03pm
14th Feb 2025 11:03pm
GREENLAND
I wanna whisk you away to Greenland,
Like whipped cream -
To the largest island in the World!
I wanna spoil you with Danish Kroner -
The official local currency.
I wanna make love to you in the snow,
Like nobody knows, as we live like Eskimos,
Trudging through its 80% ice cap.
I will lavish you with fresh fish and wine -
Ravish you, once we reach Nuuk (Nuke),
The capital. Divine!
I love it when you talk like that!
Take me away and treasure me,
If only in wishes and dreams -
Then so be it.
Feed me until I...
Like whipped cream -
To the largest island in the World!
I wanna spoil you with Danish Kroner -
The official local currency.
I wanna make love to you in the snow,
Like nobody knows, as we live like Eskimos,
Trudging through its 80% ice cap.
I will lavish you with fresh fish and wine -
Ravish you, once we reach Nuuk (Nuke),
The capital. Divine!
I love it when you talk like that!
Take me away and treasure me,
If only in wishes and dreams -
Then so be it.
Feed me until I...
#dreams
#hope
#inspirational
#passion
#ThrillSeeking
393 reads
46 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
14th Feb 2025 10:57am
14th Feb 2025 10:57am
A Romantic Tale
Decades ago a man was in love with a woman
he would do crazy acts to seek her attention
he was a daredevil
he's faced death numerous times
he's played chicken with trains,
jumped off bridges and survived the plunge,
climbed skyscrapers,
and even imitated some of Houdini's work
nevertheless he was crazy, but good at what he did
one day he told his girlfriend that he was going to go over Niagara Falls in a barrel
she told him you're insane
if you do this you could die and we'll never have a life together
his mind was made up and told...
he would do crazy acts to seek her attention
he was a daredevil
he's faced death numerous times
he's played chicken with trains,
jumped off bridges and survived the plunge,
climbed skyscrapers,
and even imitated some of Houdini's work
nevertheless he was crazy, but good at what he did
one day he told his girlfriend that he was going to go over Niagara Falls in a barrel
she told him you're insane
if you do this you could die and we'll never have a life together
his mind was made up and told...
#lover
#marriage
#ShortStory
#ThrillSeeking
#ValentinesDay
123 reads
13 Comments
Billy_Snagg
Jizzman
Jizzman
Poem Published
13th Feb 2025 10:43pm
13th Feb 2025 10:43pm
007 Heaven!
I will take you out tonight, baby.
I will look my best, just like James Bond -
007 heaven...
I want heads to turn,
Curiosity to surround us,
Envious men, jealous women -
Wondering what we might get up to,
My loaded gun;
Knowing it's you I end up fucking,
And not them...
Later... much later at the hotel!
I will protect you, flirt -
Give you what you need!
Can't say too much right now,
Cos I'm on a secret mission...
To seduce you.
You'll be surprised by my spontaneity,
Amazed, not...
I will look my best, just like James Bond -
007 heaven...
I want heads to turn,
Curiosity to surround us,
Envious men, jealous women -
Wondering what we might get up to,
My loaded gun;
Knowing it's you I end up fucking,
And not them...
Later... much later at the hotel!
I will protect you, flirt -
Give you what you need!
Can't say too much right now,
Cos I'm on a secret mission...
To seduce you.
You'll be surprised by my spontaneity,
Amazed, not...
#lover
#romantic
#sex
#ThrillSeeking
#ValentinesDay
281 reads
16 Comments
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