Poems About Self Discovery Seeking Honest Critique
#SelfDiscovery
Poems about self discovery seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
Yesterday 1:04pm
Yesterday 1:04pm
Accepting My Fate
Here I am as I am in a state of relaxation of meditation, preparing my mind thoughts for another phase, of more testing in my life of cancer. Yet still I'm not giving up yet for this precious element known as life, for sure I am grateful and thankful and blessed, to be able to have a second chance at life. For what ever is the outcome in this space and time ⌚ I remain resilient on a positive level of energy and determination and perseverance. For sure I still believe in my faith and beliefs, that GOD ALMIGHTY is here to guide me upon this Earthly, journey and travel and walk through...
#emotional
#SelfDiscovery
#SelfReflection
#SelfWorth
#StreamOfConsciousness
32 reads
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wallyroo92
Poem Published
10th Apr 2025 5:11am
10th Apr 2025 5:11am
Parallel
While everyone else slumbers and sleep avoids us
The subconscious connects to the universe
With an energy that flows smoothly
Mystically
As if the synapses firing at high speeds
Are working out equations and conjuring hypotheses
Based on years of trial and error
Maybe it’s a parallel realm
Reaching out
They’ve figured out the kinks
While we’re here finding ourselves back at square one
Perhaps it’s the spirit
Reaching deep into the subconscious
Pulling up a bucket full of resolutions from the well of memory ...
The subconscious connects to the universe
With an energy that flows smoothly
Mystically
As if the synapses firing at high speeds
Are working out equations and conjuring hypotheses
Based on years of trial and error
Maybe it’s a parallel realm
Reaching out
They’ve figured out the kinks
While we’re here finding ourselves back at square one
Perhaps it’s the spirit
Reaching deep into the subconscious
Pulling up a bucket full of resolutions from the well of memory ...
#meditation
#SelfDiscovery
36 reads
1 Comment
wallyroo92
Poem Published
7th Apr 2025 3:40am
7th Apr 2025 3:40am
Velvet Knight
I wanted to be a better musician
But my insecurities had me frozen
I wanted to prove to myself that I was just a good
By my fear was making a fool out of myself
So I practiced and practiced and practiced
It got to the point that I could feel each pulse
Each rudiment felt like it was in slow motion
My skill had reached a new height
But still there was more to learn
It was when a group of us wanted to audition
That I again froze
I knew I had it in me
Just maybe
But now I’ll just never know
Instead I picked...
But my insecurities had me frozen
I wanted to prove to myself that I was just a good
By my fear was making a fool out of myself
So I practiced and practiced and practiced
It got to the point that I could feel each pulse
Each rudiment felt like it was in slow motion
My skill had reached a new height
But still there was more to learn
It was when a group of us wanted to audition
That I again froze
I knew I had it in me
Just maybe
But now I’ll just never know
Instead I picked...
#memories
#music
#SelfDiscovery
#SelfReflection
#WritingPoetry
48 reads
2 Comments
InDreamz
Poem Published
5th Apr 2025 5:09pm
5th Apr 2025 5:09pm
universe in my hands
The stars bloomed
as the narrow rivulets streamed across
the terrain of my palms;
forming islands, peninsulas, chains...
whole map of my life
came alive...
The high and low planetary mounts
on my mushy rosy manus
marked my characteristics;
planets, constellation
sun and moon
carved my fate,
once a palmist said...
but unaware that destiny lies
within our own hands
It's the neurons in my brain
and...
as the narrow rivulets streamed across
the terrain of my palms;
forming islands, peninsulas, chains...
whole map of my life
came alive...
The high and low planetary mounts
on my mushy rosy manus
marked my characteristics;
planets, constellation
sun and moon
carved my fate,
once a palmist said...
but unaware that destiny lies
within our own hands
It's the neurons in my brain
and...
#fate
#SelfDiscovery
#stars
#StreamOfConsciousness
#universe
106 reads
6 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
5th Apr 2025 1:48pm
5th Apr 2025 1:48pm
Native Harmony
Here I am as I am a entity of strength and perseverance, still surviving just trying to take it one day at a time ⌚ For the elders say that we are the chosen ones who were chosen, because of our strength and courage and perseverance. TO lead as an example for the wolf pack through the process of our journeys and travels and walks. THROUGH the forest of life and in the world. 🌎 For sure we can be many things in different ways and forms of existence. For sure we have a real sense of survival instinct, for wanting nothing more and nothing less than what we need to survive. 🐺
#acceptance
#identity
#SelfDiscovery
#SelfReflection
#SelfWorth
57 reads
2 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
3rd Apr 2025 6:29am
3rd Apr 2025 6:29am
Here's Your Uproar
Under pressure some expressions may not be at their best
It’s something we all might have struggled with
at one time or another
But to hear the uproar from a woman oh be warned…
Because aside from the bullet shells
there may be hell to pay
It’s a rapid-fire kind of life, if you ask me
One where emotion and logic try to keep in balance
But when words seem to fail what are we left with?
Bloody fingers to pick up the pieces
As if cleaning up the mess
bring us closer together
74 Unique Words
94 Total
It’s something we all might have struggled with
at one time or another
But to hear the uproar from a woman oh be warned…
Because aside from the bullet shells
there may be hell to pay
It’s a rapid-fire kind of life, if you ask me
One where emotion and logic try to keep in balance
But when words seem to fail what are we left with?
Bloody fingers to pick up the pieces
As if cleaning up the mess
bring us closer together
74 Unique Words
94 Total
#PersonalGrowth
#SelfDiscovery
#SelfReflection
63 reads
2 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
2nd Apr 2025 11:12am
2nd Apr 2025 11:12am
This is our world now
As I continue to stand and tolerate the treatments of society, I have to be able to decide that my own decisions are not an option, but more of a trust issue with society. For it's true that we have to learn to navigate through, the process of being aware of the many levels of changes happening in the world of today 🌍 For sure we have to learn to understand ourselves first, in making the right decisions on survival in this cold cold world 🌎 For sure we have to learn valuable lessons that will affect us in ways, that we never thought that we had to learn. For example they say...
#confessional
#LifeAsAWriter
#SelfDiscovery
#SelfReflection
#SelfWorth
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0 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
1st Apr 2025 8:53pm
1st Apr 2025 8:53pm
Inner Balance + inner peace
From the deepness of your own mind and the deepness of your own life, is where your strength will find the perseverance, and the deepness of your point of relaxation in a utopia of your own sanctuary. For only you can alone touch, the deepness of your inner balance and your strength of inner senses of Peace, within the process of manifestation of what you seek. For it's true that sometimes we have to learn, to separate thyself from the negativity, in search of what we need and want in our own lives. For it's true that we are only humans of skin and flesh and blood, that we can only take...
#LifeStruggles
#SelfDiscovery
#SelfReflection
#SelfWorth
#suffering
68 reads
0 Comments
gothicsurrealism
Daniel Long
Daniel Long
Poem Published
29th Mar 2025 2:51pm
29th Mar 2025 2:51pm
Alone
I am alone within the remote regions of my mind.
Safely isolated from the judgmental world
where I’m an introvert. This endless seclusion
for a mortal scribing immortal words
is accompanied intimately by lasting loneliness.
Safely isolated from the judgmental world
where I’m an introvert. This endless seclusion
for a mortal scribing immortal words
is accompanied intimately by lasting loneliness.
#bipolar
#MentalHealth
#SelfDiscovery
#SelfReflection
#surreal
68 reads
1 Comment
KittyFromHell
Poem Published
25th Mar 2025 11:59pm
25th Mar 2025 11:59pm
No - A Word I Can No Longer Say
I used to be so full of "fuck you"
My heart was passionate,
My mind opinionated.
Boy, you couldn't tell me shit!
The years have gone by,
And I've grown older.
Days turned to decades
Of shutting up and backing down,
Playing by everyone else's rules
Just to get by.
Nights I've spent screaming and blubbering
Into blackness
The only time my voice truly finds me
Crawling back on hands and knees
After hours and hours
Of choking on words unsaid in the daylight.
These days I...
My heart was passionate,
My mind opinionated.
Boy, you couldn't tell me shit!
The years have gone by,
And I've grown older.
Days turned to decades
Of shutting up and backing down,
Playing by everyone else's rules
Just to get by.
Nights I've spent screaming and blubbering
Into blackness
The only time my voice truly finds me
Crawling back on hands and knees
After hours and hours
Of choking on words unsaid in the daylight.
These days I...
#childhood
#depression
#SelfDiscovery
#SelfReflection
#SelfWorth
89 reads
3 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
25th Mar 2025 8:42pm
25th Mar 2025 8:42pm
Success Failure Squeaky Door
Fixed a squeaky door
WD40
Expect the squeak anyway
Somewhat disappointed
Success
Failure too
WD40
Expect the squeak anyway
Somewhat disappointed
Success
Failure too
#identity
#LifeStruggles
#SelfDiscovery
#TruthOfLife
#WritingPoetry
97 reads
22 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
25th Mar 2025 3:47am
25th Mar 2025 3:47am
That Outer BODY feelings
Have you ever had a sacred outer body experience with feelings, with a real positive level of energy as you go through, a manfestion which revolves within your thoughts of your own mind thoughts. For sure it's necessary to understand, that what you think you have the ability to be able to achieve. As it is a want and need to believe that you alone, have the ability and power within your own hands and mind thoughts. For do you really believe in your faith of your mind thoughts, that you do possess the skills of magical powers of strength and energy and determination and PERSEVERANCE. TO PUSH...
#dialogue
#metaphor
#philosophical
#SelfDiscovery
#StreamOfConsciousness
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