Poems About Life Goals by Top Critiquers
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Poems about life goals by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Surrender
Once I failed
I regret, oh, how I regret!
What if it happens again?
Full of doubts and fear
I stand at the shore
of the river of life
I hear a seductive voice:
Take off your clothes!
Don't hold back! Jump!
Waves washing around my body
I am floating, zero gravity
no ground under my feet
no future, no past
no hope, no desire
only trust and surrender
Finally I found what I have been seeking
I am at home, perfectly happy
devoted to the magical moment of the NOW
I regret, oh, how I regret!
What if it happens again?
Full of doubts and fear
I stand at the shore
of the river of life
I hear a seductive voice:
Take off your clothes!
Don't hold back! Jump!
Waves washing around my body
I am floating, zero gravity
no ground under my feet
no future, no past
no hope, no desire
only trust and surrender
Finally I found what I have been seeking
I am at home, perfectly happy
devoted to the magical moment of the NOW
#LifeGoals
#wisdom
582 reads
4 Comments
Step out
Arise sleeper and take up your plow.
Prepare your harnesses and oil your tack.
The ground has had its sabbath rest and is become disquieted.
Remove the rocks and rubble, burn the weeds and stubble.
Strike the fallow ground and don't relent.
Dig in and rip complacency away.
From sunrise until darkness covers the land.
The trumpet speaks, the time is right,
The earth rumbles in anticipation.
The sowers are holding the seed
waiting, watching, watching, hoping for broken ground.
The husbandmen and shepherds bounce from...
Prepare your harnesses and oil your tack.
The ground has had its sabbath rest and is become disquieted.
Remove the rocks and rubble, burn the weeds and stubble.
Strike the fallow ground and don't relent.
Dig in and rip complacency away.
From sunrise until darkness covers the land.
The trumpet speaks, the time is right,
The earth rumbles in anticipation.
The sowers are holding the seed
waiting, watching, watching, hoping for broken ground.
The husbandmen and shepherds bounce from...
#escape
#LifeChangingMoment
#LifeGoals #MovingOn
#LifeGoals #MovingOn
80 reads
2 Comments
C'Mon, Give It Up...
I've sure given up on giving stuff up
like all my goodies I'm supposed to quit
so New Years Resolutions can just get stuffed,
And I'll grow old and fat, stewed in my cups,
because giving up things can be the pits
I've sure given up on giving stuff up...
Like scoffing chocs, dribbling beer as I sup,
or hoarding tat as if I've sticky mits
so New Years Resolutions can just get stuffed,
Or ranting at the neighbour's cheeky pups, ...
like all my goodies I'm supposed to quit
so New Years Resolutions can just get stuffed,
And I'll grow old and fat, stewed in my cups,
because giving up things can be the pits
I've sure given up on giving stuff up...
Like scoffing chocs, dribbling beer as I sup,
or hoarding tat as if I've sticky mits
so New Years Resolutions can just get stuffed,
Or ranting at the neighbour's cheeky pups, ...
#villanelle
#LifeGoals
#NewYear #tradition
#NewYear #tradition
105 reads
2 Comments
Mastery
mind has gone flabby
pushed around by psyche's whims
time for some toning
pushed around by psyche's whims
time for some toning
#LifeGoals
#learning
#SelfReflection
522 reads
2 Comments
Life efficiency
If I eat now
I will have to drink more.
I will have to drink more.
#LifeGoals
330 reads
1 Comment
Building a Life
Building a Life
Where youth misses,
Age abides.
It is in our faults
We learn,
And therein
Turn the tides.
Where youth
Hurries in
To sooth satisfy
Its frenzied feed,
Age must wait
And guard
The trail
To stay upon
The steed.
The journey
Takes
Its casual course
And life
Its unused favor,
For
In the distance,
There abouts,
There lies
In wait
A saber.
We must search
And yield
In turn
With arbitration's ...
Where youth misses,
Age abides.
It is in our faults
We learn,
And therein
Turn the tides.
Where youth
Hurries in
To sooth satisfy
Its frenzied feed,
Age must wait
And guard
The trail
To stay upon
The steed.
The journey
Takes
Its casual course
And life
Its unused favor,
For
In the distance,
There abouts,
There lies
In wait
A saber.
We must search
And yield
In turn
With arbitration's ...
#LifeGoals
#learning
#acceptance
#wisdom
#determination
449 reads
4 Comments
A New Year
I make no new year resolutions
and so I disappoint no one
especially myself if I may say so
Furthermore, it leaves me with
next to no regrets
And I like it this way
Changing and growing
go hand in hand
I strive to better myself
on a daily basis and
see no need at all
to put self improvement off
until the new year begins
I'm better off this way
and so I disappoint no one
especially myself if I may say so
Furthermore, it leaves me with
next to no regrets
And I like it this way
Changing and growing
go hand in hand
I strive to better myself
on a daily basis and
see no need at all
to put self improvement off
until the new year begins
I'm better off this way
#LifeStruggles
#inspirational
#LifeChangingMoment
#LifeGoals
#NewYear
432 reads
11 Comments
Susan Came To Hollywood

#fiction
#LifeGoals
#ignorance
#suffering
#sensual
217 reads
2 Comments
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