LGBT Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#LGBT
LGBT seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
oldmanG
Poem Published
12th Oct 2024 12:55pm
12th Oct 2024 12:55pm
Drag Thoughts
Drag thoughts
Thoughts drag
Drag story time
Reading books
Drag thoughtful
Pleasure in human flesh
Thoughtful drag
Lifts up my spirits
Just want to exist
In this hateful place
Not putting upon
What makes me be alive
Thoughts in drag
Reasoned and respectful
Why can’t they be one of us
When they give so much love
Not asking for anything special
Just to be realized as human
And not a freak of nature
The only thing they groom
Is...
Thoughts drag
Drag story time
Reading books
Drag thoughtful
Pleasure in human flesh
Thoughtful drag
Lifts up my spirits
Just want to exist
In this hateful place
Not putting upon
What makes me be alive
Thoughts in drag
Reasoned and respectful
Why can’t they be one of us
When they give so much love
Not asking for anything special
Just to be realized as human
And not a freak of nature
The only thing they groom
Is...
#identity
#LGBT
#love
#misunderstood
#reading
95 reads
2 Comments
neves
Poem Published
11th Oct 2024 11:11am
11th Oct 2024 11:11am
It gets so bad it makes sense
when you
slowly draw
the curtains
and petrol
begins to spill
from your
legs,
waiting for
my mouth
to ignite
that all
consuming
howl.
slowly draw
the curtains
and petrol
begins to spill
from your
legs,
waiting for
my mouth
to ignite
that all
consuming
howl.
#confessional
#erotic
#LGBT #relationships
#LGBT #relationships
171 reads
1 Comment
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
4th Oct 2024 11:06pm
4th Oct 2024 11:06pm
Conflicts
The US government is the mastermind of all the major conflicts that are currently happening.
America desperately wants to dominate and enslave the entire world.
They cunningly build hatred among other nations to achieve their aim.
It gives the impression that many countries are blind to the satanic strategy of the Americans.
NATO is like a bloodsucking parasite; it cannot be trusted at any time.
The members of this loathsome organization are filthy liars and warmongers.
All NATO countries are slaves of the Americans, but they do not...
America desperately wants to dominate and enslave the entire world.
They cunningly build hatred among other nations to achieve their aim.
It gives the impression that many countries are blind to the satanic strategy of the Americans.
NATO is like a bloodsucking parasite; it cannot be trusted at any time.
The members of this loathsome organization are filthy liars and warmongers.
All NATO countries are slaves of the Americans, but they do not...
#LGBT
#oppression
#politics #war
#politics #war
106 reads
0 Comments
Casted_Runes
Mr Karswell
Mr Karswell
Poem Published
9th Sep 2024 3:10am
9th Sep 2024 3:10am
sure, buddy.
a guilty pleasure of mine is
reading conversion therapy books
by men who are clearly gay
and trying to make me believe
that rest stop encounters they’ve had
finished with the glory of God
shining down and saving all
between the oil pumps and bogs
because through prayer they’ve overcome
their thirst for same-sex touch…
sure, buddy.
reading conversion therapy books
by men who are clearly gay
and trying to make me believe
that rest stop encounters they’ve had
finished with the glory of God
shining down and saving all
between the oil pumps and bogs
because through prayer they’ve overcome
their thirst for same-sex touch…
sure, buddy.
#LGBT
#religion
#sex #shame
#sex #shame
145 reads
4 Comments
EveAteRedApples
Poem Published
31st Aug 2024 12:13pm
31st Aug 2024 12:13pm
hey babe
Hey babe
would you mind if I went back to girls?
I'm tired of all your hard edges
of your rigid insistent body
when these days I crave
blurred lines and soft curves
to lull me to sleep
Hey babe
would you mind if I went back to girls?
and no you can't stay and watch
I'm not your personal gangbang porno
and I'm not up for being the third wheel
in another threesome
when the last one went so well
Hey babe
would you mind if I went back to girls?
forgot the stubble rash you left
between my...
would you mind if I went back to girls?
I'm tired of all your hard edges
of your rigid insistent body
when these days I crave
blurred lines and soft curves
to lull me to sleep
Hey babe
would you mind if I went back to girls?
and no you can't stay and watch
I'm not your personal gangbang porno
and I'm not up for being the third wheel
in another threesome
when the last one went so well
Hey babe
would you mind if I went back to girls?
forgot the stubble rash you left
between my...
#bisexual
#crush
#lesbian #LGBT
#lesbian #LGBT
303 reads
6 Comments
xthan
Poem Published
16th Aug 2024 11:52am
16th Aug 2024 11:52am
What if wonderland
was the underbelly
of the world alice
thought they knew
the rabbit hole
being the spine
they fell through,
alice watches
a pocketwatch
ticking inside
their ribcage
as tea slowly
pumps around
their blue china
thread veins,
further down
alice greets
a posse of
whispering
flower buds
that bloom slowly
singing golden
afternoon in
their stomach,
spinning around
as their blue and
white clothes
puff inside ...
of the world alice
thought they knew
the rabbit hole
being the spine
they fell through,
alice watches
a pocketwatch
ticking inside
their ribcage
as tea slowly
pumps around
their blue china
thread veins,
further down
alice greets
a posse of
whispering
flower buds
that bloom slowly
singing golden
afternoon in
their stomach,
spinning around
as their blue and
white clothes
puff inside ...
#LGBT
#LifeCycle
#transgender
#symbolism
#evolution
198 reads
2 Comments
xthan
Poem Published
14th Aug 2024 6:12pm
14th Aug 2024 6:12pm
I confess this heat is insufferable
the way it bends and breaks us
into leaving things left unspoken
last night, you confessed it would be
infinitely better laying by my side
in this overgrown garden
falling asleep watching the
starry sky in my arms
in that moment, I felt that garden
trying to crawl out of our opposite
signs alive
as air inside my body fans your words
rising up into flames;
from resigning on a split pole
never failing to draw
each other in.
into leaving things left unspoken
last night, you confessed it would be
infinitely better laying by my side
in this overgrown garden
falling asleep watching the
starry sky in my arms
in that moment, I felt that garden
trying to crawl out of our opposite
signs alive
as air inside my body fans your words
rising up into flames;
from resigning on a split pole
never failing to draw
each other in.
#LGBT
#polyamory
#relationships
208 reads
1 Comment
xthan
Poem Published
13th Aug 2024 3:34pm
13th Aug 2024 3:34pm
Please write me down with your eyes
note the smile I gift
walking across these
white chlorine tiles,
did you believe I was broken
lost in strange text fonts
covered in hateful lies
does my irony upset you
as my scars dance naked
in broad daylight?
does my small frame offend you
as my body ripples water we
happen to share and glide
does my laughter slice
through your pupils
measured in media
sized ignorance?
please write me down
with your eyes,
my scars will
bare a smile
back at you.
walking across these
white chlorine tiles,
did you believe I was broken
lost in strange text fonts
covered in hateful lies
does my irony upset you
as my scars dance naked
in broad daylight?
does my small frame offend you
as my body ripples water we
happen to share and glide
does my laughter slice
through your pupils
measured in media
sized ignorance?
please write me down
with your eyes,
my scars will
bare a smile
back at you.
#LGBT
#metaphor
#transgender #symbolism
#transgender #symbolism
179 reads
2 Comments
neves
Poem Published
10th Aug 2024 11:47pm
10th Aug 2024 11:47pm
In summer
We dream on
a brown sofa
without any
cushions
our hands
melding into
each other
like long
prayers
seeing
through
a rough
drought.
a brown sofa
without any
cushions
our hands
melding into
each other
like long
prayers
seeing
through
a rough
drought.
#confessional
#LGBT
224 reads
0 Comments
OyateInyanNajin
Poem Published
5th Aug 2024 5:13am
5th Aug 2024 5:13am
LOVE IN MY ARMS (II)-(1976, Poretto Jetty, Galveston Island, Texas; on a dark night of struggling with my being Gay.)
love in my arms
here then gone
so rarely comes
but when it does
like some rare moon tide
and seems to be true and real
each new time around
it also seems
to almost always go away
as quickly as it comes
then just a short while later
after waking from my sleep s
already forgotten
meandering dreams
i got up to begin another new day
i wrote down those initial
still lingering thoughts
stil faintly echoing away in my head
which softly arose
as i...
here then gone
so rarely comes
but when it does
like some rare moon tide
and seems to be true and real
each new time around
it also seems
to almost always go away
as quickly as it comes
then just a short while later
after waking from my sleep s
already forgotten
meandering dreams
i got up to begin another new day
i wrote down those initial
still lingering thoughts
stil faintly echoing away in my head
which softly arose
as i...
#confusion
#ForbiddenLove
#LGBT
#loneliness
#shame
141 reads
0 Comments
Officialkn9ne
Poem Published
9th Jul 2024 00:41am
9th Jul 2024 00:41am
Fight For Love
I'm willing to fight for your love,
To battle against the forces that try to tear us apart.
I'll stand strong in the face of adversity,
Ready to defend what we have with all my heart.
I'll go to war against doubt and fear,
Facing every challenge head on.
I'll fight for us with everything I have,
Because in your love, I have found my home.
I'll fight for our love with courage and grace,
Standing tall in the midst of the storm.
I'll never give up, never surrender,
For in your love, I am reborn.
I'll fight for you...
To battle against the forces that try to tear us apart.
I'll stand strong in the face of adversity,
Ready to defend what we have with all my heart.
I'll go to war against doubt and fear,
Facing every challenge head on.
I'll fight for us with everything I have,
Because in your love, I have found my home.
I'll fight for our love with courage and grace,
Standing tall in the midst of the storm.
I'll never give up, never surrender,
For in your love, I am reborn.
I'll fight for you...
#LGBT
#LookingForLove
#love
#romantic
#sacrifice
330 reads
0 Comments
xthan
Poem Published
2nd Jul 2024 3:26pm
2nd Jul 2024 3:26pm
People prepare meals before a body dies
but never prepare
recipes when a body
begins to blossom.
recipes when a body
begins to blossom.
#LGBT
#LifeCycle
#minimalist #transgender
#minimalist #transgender
145 reads
0 Comments
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