Poems About First Love by Top Critiquers
#FirstLove
Poems about first love by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
6th Oct 2024 3:08am
6th Oct 2024 3:08am
The Spider and her lover the Fly
Spider
I have been sitting here for hours, spinning my silken threads, waiting for him to fly by.
He has promised me countless numbers of times that tonight will be the night that he will visit me. I made sure that the threads were glistening in their finest diamonds and my legs. Oh my legs are as sexy as can be. There are eight long and lean made for flexibility. To entice and invite him into my web, you see.
Fly
How do I get wrapped up with these crazy dames? I mean I flew past one time and she caught me. The romp with the twists and the turns....
I have been sitting here for hours, spinning my silken threads, waiting for him to fly by.
He has promised me countless numbers of times that tonight will be the night that he will visit me. I made sure that the threads were glistening in their finest diamonds and my legs. Oh my legs are as sexy as can be. There are eight long and lean made for flexibility. To entice and invite him into my web, you see.
Fly
How do I get wrapped up with these crazy dames? I mean I flew past one time and she caught me. The romp with the twists and the turns....
#FirstLove
#obsession
#sacrifice
196 reads
14 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
31st May 2021 9:16pm
31st May 2021 9:16pm
my Adonai sweet Adonai I love you
I am the drought upon the land keening for moonshine
will it ever rain on Hollywood again?
they are the merry making mischief makers
chaos is still reigning
the little ones are indulged
I am trying to fit them aboard
the heaven's are being shook
the abyss is too
his will be done
I do sympathize
but the plague cannot be upon the land again
I pray for truth to please her Father
my spirit seeks the humble abodes to find shelter in the storm
I am afraid he is so angry
I've given as he's asked but to his own he won't be...
will it ever rain on Hollywood again?
they are the merry making mischief makers
chaos is still reigning
the little ones are indulged
I am trying to fit them aboard
the heaven's are being shook
the abyss is too
his will be done
I do sympathize
but the plague cannot be upon the land again
I pray for truth to please her Father
my spirit seeks the humble abodes to find shelter in the storm
I am afraid he is so angry
I've given as he's asked but to his own he won't be...
#love
#lover
#FirstLove
345 reads
3 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
25th Feb 2024 4:45pm
25th Feb 2024 4:45pm
RESISTANCE
#sex
#erotic
#rhyming
#FirstLove
#seductive
252 reads
3 Comments
TheOralizer
Poem Published
16th Sep 2023 7:05pm
16th Sep 2023 7:05pm
SEX VERSUS LOVE
It has taken
me a long time
to discover an
amazing truth.
SEX
last for
a SHORT
time, at
BEST.
BUT LOVE
lasts and
satisfies for
a lifetime. I am
Thankful I
can have BOTH
and know which
amazing gift
period I am in.
Meet me at the
Kissing Place and
today we'll enjoy both.
OKAY?
me a long time
to discover an
amazing truth.
SEX
last for
a SHORT
time, at
BEST.
BUT LOVE
lasts and
satisfies for
a lifetime. I am
Thankful I
can have BOTH
and know which
amazing gift
period I am in.
Meet me at the
Kissing Place and
today we'll enjoy both.
OKAY?
#happiness
#honesty
#gratitude
#admiration
#FirstLove
309 reads
8 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
29th Sep 2020 11:30am
29th Sep 2020 11:30am
TO BE HELD AND HUG
If you ever been hurt by someone who you thought was in your corner, only to find out later that someone was merely testing your ability to trust and believe within them. Then you should recognize the true silhouette of the shadow that stands before you, even though you may think that you know them only to be fooling yourself into believing. That they have your best interest at heart when it comes to loving and caring for you. For sometimes we all have a need and want to be held within the confine, arms of someone's heart and soul as we stop and look and listen to the stillness of our own...
#FallingInLove
#UnrequitedLove
#LongDistanceRelationship
#FirstLove
#ForbiddenLove
701 reads
6 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
2nd Mar 2024 9:49pm
2nd Mar 2024 9:49pm
Eustasia
#relationships
#FirstLove
163 reads
7 Comments
goodwolf1966
jimmy
jimmy
Poem Published
5th Dec 2024 9:29am
5th Dec 2024 9:29am
one dry rose (from long ago)
she opened
the book
that held
one of her
secrets,
silently
waiting
for many
years,
was one
single
dry rose,
one that
brought
back
memories
before her
husband,
and she
held that
delicate
rose,
remembering
and smiled.
the book
that held
one of her
secrets,
silently
waiting
for many
years,
was one
single
dry rose,
one that
brought
back
memories
before her
husband,
and she
held that
delicate
rose,
remembering
and smiled.
#FirstLove
#happiness
#husband
#relationships
#romantic
99 reads
2 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
3rd Jul 2020 3:43am
3rd Jul 2020 3:43am
My Rose
Mm… my silken rose petals, caressing the softness, of my supple skin
The pillow of his desires where, “Passion’ becomes ecstasies’ greatest sin
Replace in your mind …the whispers of his sultry wishes
Oo…my love, take my breath away, with your tender enchanting kisses
Mmm… pleasure felt… making my temple melt
In the abyss…. of my moisten nature
My soul I bare unto you, worshipping me with your gentle hands
Laying on my back, fingers snaking deep inside me ….as they wickedly dance
Closing my eyes, your thoughts, roaming seductively over me ...
The pillow of his desires where, “Passion’ becomes ecstasies’ greatest sin
Replace in your mind …the whispers of his sultry wishes
Oo…my love, take my breath away, with your tender enchanting kisses
Mmm… pleasure felt… making my temple melt
In the abyss…. of my moisten nature
My soul I bare unto you, worshipping me with your gentle hands
Laying on my back, fingers snaking deep inside me ….as they wickedly dance
Closing my eyes, your thoughts, roaming seductively over me ...
#lover
#FirstLove
1719 reads
19 Comments
Naajir
Poem Published
27th Feb 2019 4:11pm
27th Feb 2019 4:11pm
Once Upon A Distant Planet
And So It Was Written..
this
the epoch
of Her long awaited apocalypse
genesis looming within her doom eclipsing the soul
sinking.....sinking
into a shadowy dimension with
seraphic overseers a thousand shades of grey
serving as minions for
He that is Him
Her High Evolutionary perched
above Her sphere..terra-forming dystopian lands
of Her counter-earth through expansionism
His manifest destiny excavating Her crimson womb
birthing forth a...
this
the epoch
of Her long awaited apocalypse
genesis looming within her doom eclipsing the soul
sinking.....sinking
into a shadowy dimension with
seraphic overseers a thousand shades of grey
serving as minions for
He that is Him
Her High Evolutionary perched
above Her sphere..terra-forming dystopian lands
of Her counter-earth through expansionism
His manifest destiny excavating Her crimson womb
birthing forth a...
#earth
#universe
#God
#evolution
#FirstLove
571 reads
4 Comments
nutbuster
D C
D C
Poem Published
12th May 2024 2:35am
12th May 2024 2:35am
You Are Standing Naked Before Me
#FirstLove
#passion
#seductive #sensual
#seductive #sensual
293 reads
5 Comments
dimpy
dimpsmoon
dimpsmoon
Poem Published
1st Nov 2023 6:11am
1st Nov 2023 6:11am
amniotic fluid
that was
a
fleeting joy
when I was
in
my
mother's womb.
there is
no memory
of that past joy,
yet it brings
a sparkle to
the eyes
Where
there will be
marks of
the trouble
caused by me
and
no trouble
will have
happened to me
I would
surely have
attained
immense
happiness
in the aura
of that
warm womb water...
a
fleeting joy
when I was
in
my
mother's womb.
there is
no memory
of that past joy,
yet it brings
a sparkle to
the eyes
Where
there will be
marks of
the trouble
caused by me
and
no trouble
will have
happened to me
I would
surely have
attained
immense
happiness
in the aura
of that
warm womb water...
#mother
#FirstLove
210 reads
14 Comments
Lyrically_Inclined
Poem Published
19th Dec 2024 4:48pm
19th Dec 2024 4:48pm
Soulmates?
She’s beautiful to me
And it’s easy for me to let her know it
I can’t keep my hands to myself
When she’s around
I’m captive to her brown eyes
Seductive is her stare
It’s so easy to let my guard down around her
It scares me
I love our deep conversations
I hate them at the same time
I don’t feel safe
Putting my emotions in the hands
Of a woman
Because the one time I did
She broke me
And I vowed to myself
I’d never let that happen again
I...
And it’s easy for me to let her know it
I can’t keep my hands to myself
When she’s around
I’m captive to her brown eyes
Seductive is her stare
It’s so easy to let my guard down around her
It scares me
I love our deep conversations
I hate them at the same time
I don’t feel safe
Putting my emotions in the hands
Of a woman
Because the one time I did
She broke me
And I vowed to myself
I’d never let that happen again
I...
#FallingInLove
#FirstLove
#ForbiddenLove
#forgiveness
#relationships
106 reads
4 Comments
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