Poems About Falling In Love Seeking Honest Critique
#FallingInLove
Poems about falling in love seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Mars_August
Mars August
Mars August
Poem Published
Yesterday 11:16pm
Yesterday 11:16pm
Lover Girl Syndrome
I can fall in love with anyone if you give me 3 days and a common thread. And I think that's my problem. I don't want or like cautiously climbing for the sake of saving face or being rational. I want to love them, and I want to do so now. This most recent boy? In 3 days, I imagined waking in his arms to snow outside my bedroom window. And he said he wanted casual. What the fuck is casual? I only know seeing someone and showing them a portrait of my perspective. That's how I love people. I want to show them magic and now I am terrified to be that. I have to DM someone and ask them "how...
#dating
#FallingInLove
#loneliness
#love
#lover
35 reads
1 Comment
Lyrically_Inclined
Poem Published
19th Dec 2024 4:48pm
19th Dec 2024 4:48pm
Soulmates?
She’s beautiful to me
And it’s easy for me to let her know it
I can’t keep my hands to myself
When she’s around
I’m captive to her brown eyes
Seductive is her stare
It’s so easy to let my guard down around her
It scares me
I love our deep conversations
I hate them at the same time
I don’t feel safe
Putting my emotions in the hands
Of a woman
Because the one time I did
She broke me
And I vowed to myself
I’d never let that happen again
I...
And it’s easy for me to let her know it
I can’t keep my hands to myself
When she’s around
I’m captive to her brown eyes
Seductive is her stare
It’s so easy to let my guard down around her
It scares me
I love our deep conversations
I hate them at the same time
I don’t feel safe
Putting my emotions in the hands
Of a woman
Because the one time I did
She broke me
And I vowed to myself
I’d never let that happen again
I...
#FallingInLove
#FirstLove
#ForbiddenLove
#forgiveness
#relationships
65 reads
4 Comments
sgtvasquezg
G. Vasquez
G. Vasquez
Poem Published
18th Dec 2024 7:58pm
18th Dec 2024 7:58pm
Te Lo Prometo
Quítatelo todo.
Tu sabes que yo quiero a ser tu gordo.
No quero correr esta mundo solo.
Pero contigo sé que puedo hacerlo todo.
Eres mi pan dulce. Ven aqui porque quiero comerte.
Me vuelves loco y fuera de mi mente.
Tienes mi corazón y ya lo sabes.
De alguna manera robaste las llaves.
Probablemente cuando me noqueaste como Chavez.
O cuando me emborrachaste como esas caguamas
Pero realmente creo que son tus nalgas.
Donde quiero poner toda mi cara.
Un mexicano como este no puedes olvidarme.
Tú y yo sabemos que necesitas amarme. ...
Tu sabes que yo quiero a ser tu gordo.
No quero correr esta mundo solo.
Pero contigo sé que puedo hacerlo todo.
Eres mi pan dulce. Ven aqui porque quiero comerte.
Me vuelves loco y fuera de mi mente.
Tienes mi corazón y ya lo sabes.
De alguna manera robaste las llaves.
Probablemente cuando me noqueaste como Chavez.
O cuando me emborrachaste como esas caguamas
Pero realmente creo que son tus nalgas.
Donde quiero poner toda mi cara.
Un mexicano como este no puedes olvidarme.
Tú y yo sabemos que necesitas amarme. ...
#FallingInLove
#love
#lust
#seductive
#sensual
40 reads
0 Comments
Poetblue
Poeblue
Poeblue
Poem Published
17th Dec 2024 11:09pm
17th Dec 2024 11:09pm
SEASON OF LOVE IN BLOOM
When the air is cold
And winter’s frost is nipping at your nose,
When all the world is blanketed in white,
Remember the warmth of my love.
I will think of you with passion coursing through my veins,
Emotions visible to the naked eye,
A fire within me that will never die.
When the flowers bloom
And pollen floats gently through the air,
The birds sing melodies that only the heart can understand—
Yes, spring is in the air.
When gentle showers fall, leaving the night aglow,
Buzzing with the light of street lamps, ...
And winter’s frost is nipping at your nose,
When all the world is blanketed in white,
Remember the warmth of my love.
I will think of you with passion coursing through my veins,
Emotions visible to the naked eye,
A fire within me that will never die.
When the flowers bloom
And pollen floats gently through the air,
The birds sing melodies that only the heart can understand—
Yes, spring is in the air.
When gentle showers fall, leaving the night aglow,
Buzzing with the light of street lamps, ...
#FallingInLove
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0 Comments
Poetblue
Poeblue
Poeblue
Poem Published
17th Dec 2024 11:08pm
17th Dec 2024 11:08pm
HER LOVE TURNS MEN INTO FOOLS
My mind is constantly on you… my heart skips beats—what is a man to do?
I cannot breathe; my lungs feel as though they are collapsing within.
I sit here in deep thought, consumed by you,
Wondering, hoping that you are lost in thoughts of me too.
My soul aches in a way that words cannot explain—
Life-threatening, intoxicating, addictive, and insane.
I fall to my knees, weakened at the sight of you;
Love courses through my veins, and your name breaks through.
Man… this kind of love turns men into fools,
It drives them to madness,...
I cannot breathe; my lungs feel as though they are collapsing within.
I sit here in deep thought, consumed by you,
Wondering, hoping that you are lost in thoughts of me too.
My soul aches in a way that words cannot explain—
Life-threatening, intoxicating, addictive, and insane.
I fall to my knees, weakened at the sight of you;
Love courses through my veins, and your name breaks through.
Man… this kind of love turns men into fools,
It drives them to madness,...
#FallingInLove
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0 Comments
Whackytraveler
Poem Published
3rd Dec 2024 2:29am
3rd Dec 2024 2:29am
Forever be
I want to live
And breathe
For the air to be sweet
And the stars to gleam
For the sun to set
In the brightest rays of light
I want to watch it all
I want to fall
Just a little bit more
In love with you
To reside beside me
To forever be, you and me
What a fascinating thing
And breathe
For the air to be sweet
And the stars to gleam
For the sun to set
In the brightest rays of light
I want to watch it all
I want to fall
Just a little bit more
In love with you
To reside beside me
To forever be, you and me
What a fascinating thing
#FallingInLove
#romantic
146 reads
4 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
2nd Dec 2024 3:08am
2nd Dec 2024 3:08am
What will it take
For sure what I'm saying might be, happening in someone's own personal life, For sometimes down the very roads of our lives, that we will shed some tears in the silent of the darkness of our lives. But yet it's not over when you cry out in silence, while you are trying desperately not to cry. But instead you chose to fight back, the deepness of the truth of the fears that will haunts, you mostly in the wee hours of the night. For always remember that what doesn't kill you, only makes you that much stronger than you think. 🤔 For sure it's gonna be hard just to forget, about that part...
#dating
#FallingInLove
#honesty
#LifeCycle
#StreamOfConsciousness
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Mars_August
Mars August
Mars August
Poem Published
25th Nov 2024 3:27pm
25th Nov 2024 3:27pm
Between Points
I lived my whole life under a shroud of sickly clouds
mirroring the clogged earth
with no bearing to my place between them
Until I found the wilderness
and saw the stars for the first time
stood astonished, palms upright as if to say
“more”
you were written between points of the constellations
covering the distance of Ara the Altar
cosmic scripture that rained truths
and myths
and belief
on the crown of my hollow head
What would I have to do to make home here
I can't return to a place with no sky
mirroring the clogged earth
with no bearing to my place between them
Until I found the wilderness
and saw the stars for the first time
stood astonished, palms upright as if to say
“more”
you were written between points of the constellations
covering the distance of Ara the Altar
cosmic scripture that rained truths
and myths
and belief
on the crown of my hollow head
What would I have to do to make home here
I can't return to a place with no sky
#FallingInLove
#learning
#love
#memories
#spiritual
137 reads
5 Comments
Dragonnora
Nora
Nora
Poem Published
25th Nov 2024 00:19am
25th Nov 2024 00:19am
You said
You said you like my bullying
You like how I am kind of mean
You think my love for animals
Is the cutest thing you've ever seen
You like my crazy and you like my weird
Just like those other guys
I thought I heard it all and then
You said you like my eyes
When you look at them you smile more
I never liked my eyes
I never heard that one, they never said that one
before
You like my figure
You said I look hot in a dress
You like my hair
Even in the morning when it's a mess
You think I'm funny...
You like how I am kind of mean
You think my love for animals
Is the cutest thing you've ever seen
You like my crazy and you like my weird
Just like those other guys
I thought I heard it all and then
You said you like my eyes
When you look at them you smile more
I never liked my eyes
I never heard that one, they never said that one
before
You like my figure
You said I look hot in a dress
You like my hair
Even in the morning when it's a mess
You think I'm funny...
#boyfriend
#FallingInLove
#happiness
#love
#romantic
82 reads
0 Comments
Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
23rd Nov 2024 10:57am
23rd Nov 2024 10:57am
The Ball
There was a dream one night.
Beyond a fairytale far away.
I was at fancy,Victorian ball.
Dancing the night away.
I was in a blue gown.
As me and a figure sway.
In the very middle.
As people gossiped far away.
I had a big ,blue gown like Cinderella.
He had a fancy suit.
We locked eyes the whole time.
It was so sweet.
Like eating a tasty fruit.
He swayed and twirled me around.
As we kept locking eyes.
The music played.
Everyone,couples dancing before our eyes.
It was like I went...
Beyond a fairytale far away.
I was at fancy,Victorian ball.
Dancing the night away.
I was in a blue gown.
As me and a figure sway.
In the very middle.
As people gossiped far away.
I had a big ,blue gown like Cinderella.
He had a fancy suit.
We locked eyes the whole time.
It was so sweet.
Like eating a tasty fruit.
He swayed and twirled me around.
As we kept locking eyes.
The music played.
Everyone,couples dancing before our eyes.
It was like I went...
#dreams
#FallingInLove
#hope
#love
#sleep
103 reads
1 Comment
ClassyBird
Poem Published
19th Nov 2024 1:00am
19th Nov 2024 1:00am
The Man With The Bass Guitar
Hello there,
Perfect Mr. Stranger
Don't mean to sound corny
But was that you walking in my dreams
Playing on my mind
With tight strings
Deep cords
Sweet symphony
Your aura exudes vitality
You're everything I want in me
Read that again
You are everything
I want in me
The moment we locked eyes
I felt something,
Something smooth
Like the rhythm to my favorite song
Emencely satisfying
Hearing you create those vibrations
With the tip of your fingers
And the biting of your lips ...
Perfect Mr. Stranger
Don't mean to sound corny
But was that you walking in my dreams
Playing on my mind
With tight strings
Deep cords
Sweet symphony
Your aura exudes vitality
You're everything I want in me
Read that again
You are everything
I want in me
The moment we locked eyes
I felt something,
Something smooth
Like the rhythm to my favorite song
Emencely satisfying
Hearing you create those vibrations
With the tip of your fingers
And the biting of your lips ...
#admiration
#FallingInLove
#music
96 reads
3 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
18th Nov 2024 6:47pm
18th Nov 2024 6:47pm
Our Hearts Beat As One (Whispers of Love) (collab w/ Sappho)
To you, as you light up the sky
A perfect, lovely night for love
Our dreams intertwine and bind us Together, forever
My love,
I want to give myself to you
Completely lost in the magic and Beauty of the present moment
We lie in fog-covered fields
You & I harmonize like the stars
Your gentle lips whisper a song,
Lifelong
Your Ruby lips
Velvety and sweet like cherry wine
Need to be sealed with a kiss
That echoes in divine dimensions of
Future times
Eternally yours as the moon is ever so bright ...
A perfect, lovely night for love
Our dreams intertwine and bind us Together, forever
My love,
I want to give myself to you
Completely lost in the magic and Beauty of the present moment
We lie in fog-covered fields
You & I harmonize like the stars
Your gentle lips whisper a song,
Lifelong
Your Ruby lips
Velvety and sweet like cherry wine
Need to be sealed with a kiss
That echoes in divine dimensions of
Future times
Eternally yours as the moon is ever so bright ...
#collaboration
#FallingInLove
#love #romantic
#love #romantic
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2 Comments
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