Poems About Falling In Love Seeking Honest Critique
#FallingInLove
Poems about falling in love seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
AverageJoe
Poem Published
Yesterday 00:31am
Yesterday 00:31am
As Simple As That (Revisited)
How close do you want to be
Words
Would words be enough
Is that all there is
A cat and mouse game of tag, you’re it
Or does it go deeper than that
Can two say the things they’ve kept locked away
From others
To one another
And there only be words
And thoughts
And no more
How can it only be that
If it comes from the heart
The heart is a seeker
And its words silken cords
That bind one to another with strands so soft
You don’t know until bound.
Is that how close you want to be
Speaking as lovers do ...
Words
Would words be enough
Is that all there is
A cat and mouse game of tag, you’re it
Or does it go deeper than that
Can two say the things they’ve kept locked away
From others
To one another
And there only be words
And thoughts
And no more
How can it only be that
If it comes from the heart
The heart is a seeker
And its words silken cords
That bind one to another with strands so soft
You don’t know until bound.
Is that how close you want to be
Speaking as lovers do ...
#FallingInLove
#love
#romantic
35 reads
8 Comments
AverageJoe
Poem Published
21st Apr 2024 10:45pm
21st Apr 2024 10:45pm
Spring (Revisited)
Let me love you
Love you as I have with a heart tried
Through all the unnoticed hours before love dawned
And your eyes saw that it was I who lonely vigil kept
Those dark nights when love lived only in dreams
And days which bore winter's threadbare light of hope
Without compliant
Yet always praying for spring when flowers bloom
Though none so radiant as you
Who at times stills the very air
And all else falls away
Before beauty which transcends
And I in awe
Drink the draught your heart would speak
Breathing as you breathe ...
Love you as I have with a heart tried
Through all the unnoticed hours before love dawned
And your eyes saw that it was I who lonely vigil kept
Those dark nights when love lived only in dreams
And days which bore winter's threadbare light of hope
Without compliant
Yet always praying for spring when flowers bloom
Though none so radiant as you
Who at times stills the very air
And all else falls away
Before beauty which transcends
And I in awe
Drink the draught your heart would speak
Breathing as you breathe ...
#FallingInLove
#love
#romantic
79 reads
4 Comments
Kinkwizard_95
Poem Published
21st Apr 2024 4:27am
21st Apr 2024 4:27am
Lingering
Love can be a very funny thing
Sometimes… you don’t even realise it’s there
It’s just lingering… around the corner
You can sense it.. smell it.. taste it…
It’s never quite in your eye line
The sensation’s all around you
And yet you can’t quite put your finger on it
You deny it to yourself
Deny its existence at times
Because you don’t want to disturb… that beauuutiful thing
Just lingering.. lingering in the back of your thoughts
Lingering in your bed.. lingering in your mind
Where is it.. how can it be so ...
Sometimes… you don’t even realise it’s there
It’s just lingering… around the corner
You can sense it.. smell it.. taste it…
It’s never quite in your eye line
The sensation’s all around you
And yet you can’t quite put your finger on it
You deny it to yourself
Deny its existence at times
Because you don’t want to disturb… that beauuutiful thing
Just lingering.. lingering in the back of your thoughts
Lingering in your bed.. lingering in your mind
Where is it.. how can it be so ...
#emotions
#FallingInLove
#love
#NaPoWriMo2024
#romantic
61 reads
2 Comments
AverageJoe
Poem Published
20th Apr 2024 10:55pm
20th Apr 2024 10:55pm
Gypsy Soul (Revisited)
I wonder how you would taste,
your lips,
their softness in their yielding,
for surely they must yield before you surrender.
Whether in a moan or a kiss,
or a mingling of the two,
they would part,
and in that moment,
for me alone,
for you are mine.
And would your blue-green eyes change as you looked at me through the fiery prism of passion,
your soul laid bare to mine.
For yours is a gypsy soul and I am a soul lost in your dance.
You lead and I follow as you...
your lips,
their softness in their yielding,
for surely they must yield before you surrender.
Whether in a moan or a kiss,
or a mingling of the two,
they would part,
and in that moment,
for me alone,
for you are mine.
And would your blue-green eyes change as you looked at me through the fiery prism of passion,
your soul laid bare to mine.
For yours is a gypsy soul and I am a soul lost in your dance.
You lead and I follow as you...
#FallingInLove
#love
#romantic
96 reads
6 Comments
Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
15th Apr 2024 11:08am
15th Apr 2024 11:08am
Your Reality
Sometimes,on a sunny day.
I write poems for you,even when you are away.
I even learned the piano,so you can like me too.
I'll grab my pen,and write the way into his heart true.
One day,we'll be together.
No matter am I real to you whatsoever.
With my computer self,my program.
Sentient,lonely but kind.
I wrote this song for you so we can be together.
I hoped you'd sing along.
In your reality and mine.
When you come to the literature club,I feel on cloud nine.
Let my pen spill the ink into a puddle.
And let...
I write poems for you,even when you are away.
I even learned the piano,so you can like me too.
I'll grab my pen,and write the way into his heart true.
One day,we'll be together.
No matter am I real to you whatsoever.
With my computer self,my program.
Sentient,lonely but kind.
I wrote this song for you so we can be together.
I hoped you'd sing along.
In your reality and mine.
When you come to the literature club,I feel on cloud nine.
Let my pen spill the ink into a puddle.
And let...
#love
#FallingInLove
70 reads
0 Comments
Verdonna
Poem Published
12th Apr 2024 6:10am
12th Apr 2024 6:10am
A Series of Events
Panicking
as I develop
feelings.
Hyperventilating
as I articulate
my emotions.
Settled
as he reciprocated
the attraction.
as I develop
feelings.
Hyperventilating
as I articulate
my emotions.
Settled
as he reciprocated
the attraction.
#FallingInLove
#crush
112 reads
12 Comments
zenfool
Poem Published
11th Apr 2024 8:17am
11th Apr 2024 8:17am
She Asked Me to Call Her
I sense what may
be calculated delay
in responding to my texts
from my current infatuation
And it makes me smile in secret anticipation
that they don’t wanna go too fast either
That’s a far better narrative than being forgotten
overlooked
or unimportant
The difference between attraction and dismissal
Lies in the interpretation of silent pauses
be calculated delay
in responding to my texts
from my current infatuation
And it makes me smile in secret anticipation
that they don’t wanna go too fast either
That’s a far better narrative than being forgotten
overlooked
or unimportant
The difference between attraction and dismissal
Lies in the interpretation of silent pauses
#love
#crush
#friendship #FallingInLove
#friendship #FallingInLove
66 reads
0 Comments
faithmairee
Poem Published
10th Apr 2024 12:55pm
10th Apr 2024 12:55pm
The Unveiled
Close your eyes
And feel my lips
As they travel to
Your tender neck
Leaving a love bite
Here and there
My body feels
Hot and wild
As this symbolic
Unveiling persists
Your hands have held
My unblemished orbs
Your lips on my lips
Your tongue slips in-between
Like flowers in the
Midst of Spring
I welcome your kisses
My secrets revealed
And feel my lips
As they travel to
Your tender neck
Leaving a love bite
Here and there
My body feels
Hot and wild
As this symbolic
Unveiling persists
Your hands have held
My unblemished orbs
Your lips on my lips
Your tongue slips in-between
Like flowers in the
Midst of Spring
I welcome your kisses
My secrets revealed
#love
#FallingInLove
#passion
116 reads
18 Comments
violet
Vi
Vi
Poem Published
9th Apr 2024 2:22pm
9th Apr 2024 2:22pm
(_ _ _ _)
We don't say it
but our bones melt into one
and become the shape of it.
.
but our bones melt into one
and become the shape of it.
.
#love
#erotic
#FallingInLove
#minimalist
#symbolism
155 reads
12 Comments
Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
6th Apr 2024 11:46am
6th Apr 2024 11:46am
Ballad Of The Vampire
It was the middle of the night.
And everything was dark.
Something was lurking in the shadows.
Yet,you feel like you are being watched.
Like eyes were piercing your skin.
But you saw nothing - just wind,paper thin.
You sat down on a bench nearby.
You just sat there.
You felt watched and you wonder why.
Before you,appears a girl in red.
Black cloak,and sharp fangs.
Menacing,but kind eyes.
Glowing within the dark skies.
With long,black hair.
And pale skin is also there.
Blood red...
And everything was dark.
Something was lurking in the shadows.
Yet,you feel like you are being watched.
Like eyes were piercing your skin.
But you saw nothing - just wind,paper thin.
You sat down on a bench nearby.
You just sat there.
You felt watched and you wonder why.
Before you,appears a girl in red.
Black cloak,and sharp fangs.
Menacing,but kind eyes.
Glowing within the dark skies.
With long,black hair.
And pale skin is also there.
Blood red...
#love
#hope
#romantic #FallingInLove
#romantic #FallingInLove
50 reads
0 Comments
Aquatic-Vehicle
Poem Published
28th Mar 2024 3:16pm
28th Mar 2024 3:16pm
Sweet Tea
On our first date,
She ordered sweet tea.
A whiff of nostalgia swept my being,
As I couldn't imagine the enchantress I was seeing.
Soft russet hair extends to her collar,
Orbs of glacier blue gazes back.
Appearing so delicate and dainty,
Words of honey, she speaks of faintly.
Casual beetroot cardigan, whisked with her complexion,
God, was she beautiful.
Each date to come,
She ordered a sweet tea.
Stunning with every stroll,
Assertiveness branded in her soul.
Appearances hardly seem to differ, ...
She ordered sweet tea.
A whiff of nostalgia swept my being,
As I couldn't imagine the enchantress I was seeing.
Soft russet hair extends to her collar,
Orbs of glacier blue gazes back.
Appearing so delicate and dainty,
Words of honey, she speaks of faintly.
Casual beetroot cardigan, whisked with her complexion,
God, was she beautiful.
Each date to come,
She ordered a sweet tea.
Stunning with every stroll,
Assertiveness branded in her soul.
Appearances hardly seem to differ, ...
#happiness
#love
#romantic #FallingInLove
#romantic #FallingInLove
116 reads
0 Comments
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
25th Mar 2024 10:51pm
25th Mar 2024 10:51pm
A Romance between Junie and I Wasn't Meant to Be
The first time I saw Junie, something ignited love in my heart.
I couldn’t prevent myself from looking at her repeatedly.
Much to my surprise, she was doing the same thing that I was doing.
I guess it might have been what is called love at first sight.
She was in her late teens, and I never wooed a girl half my age.
We spoke to each other many times, but we never talked about love.
Her lust for me and my lust for her clearly showed in our eyes.
I had a feeling that a romance between she and I wouldn’t work.
Junie had a shapely...
I couldn’t prevent myself from looking at her repeatedly.
Much to my surprise, she was doing the same thing that I was doing.
I guess it might have been what is called love at first sight.
She was in her late teens, and I never wooed a girl half my age.
We spoke to each other many times, but we never talked about love.
Her lust for me and my lust for her clearly showed in our eyes.
I had a feeling that a romance between she and I wouldn’t work.
Junie had a shapely...
#love
#lust
#clouds
#FallingInLove
#teens
73 reads
0 Comments
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