Buddhist Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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Buddhist seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
prometheus5290
Poem Published
9th May 2023 5:18pm
9th May 2023 5:18pm
Did AI Write This Poem
No,
it did not,
but how would you know?
AI can do all the things
we wish it could not,
such as write poetry,
academic essays,
and computer languages.
it did not,
but how would you know?
AI can do all the things
we wish it could not,
such as write poetry,
academic essays,
and computer languages.
#technology
#Buddhist
#Taoism
220 reads
8 Comments
prometheus5290
Poem Published
14th Jan 2023 5:30am
14th Jan 2023 5:30am
High, How Are You?
I am high
like how are you and how do you do...
High
Like low oxygen low gravity low gravitas
High
Like empty
Like negative infinity and beyond
But in a way that manifests compassion,
Like hydroelectricity.
like how are you and how do you do...
High
Like low oxygen low gravity low gravitas
High
Like empty
Like negative infinity and beyond
But in a way that manifests compassion,
Like hydroelectricity.
#Buddhist
367 reads
4 Comments
prometheus5290
Poem Published
26th Oct 2022 00:52am
26th Oct 2022 00:52am
Anonymity
I like that you all do not know who I am,
because then it will not hurt as much when I go-
you probably will not even know.
because then it will not hurt as much when I go-
you probably will not even know.
#Buddhist
#Taoism
242 reads
0 Comments
prometheus5290
Poem Published
23rd Jun 2022 3:33am
23rd Jun 2022 3:33am
This Is Not My Solipsism -1
Rattlesnake:
I definitely did not create rattlesnake,
or anything else that can kill me by biting me,
with my mind.
I definitely did not create rattlesnake,
or anything else that can kill me by biting me,
with my mind.
#Buddhist
#evolution
#Taoism
260 reads
5 Comments
prometheus5290
Poem Published
30th Mar 2022 4:08am
30th Mar 2022 4:08am
Heirarchy of needs
All you
think-you're-thinkers
need to think
from the bottom up,
like Maslow,
or your thoughts
will just keep toppling over,
like the cities in America.
think-you're-thinkers
need to think
from the bottom up,
like Maslow,
or your thoughts
will just keep toppling over,
like the cities in America.
#Buddhist
#HumanRights
319 reads
0 Comments
AaronBraveHeart
Poem Published
7th Nov 2021 9:00pm
7th Nov 2021 9:00pm
Virupa
What has ever been the curse
of women since the dawn of life?
What is the fear they consider the worst,
calling out only piercing shrieks and cries?
It is their death. The ugliness.
A grave the swinging cradle,
turned to deathbed of loneliness,
genes displeased, karma prenatal.
Even the most affectionate soul,
the tender understanding angel,
would provoke rejection and foul,
disgust ridiculing the honest stranger.
It was Yordan Yovkov that said
Beauty is always a blessed exhuberance, ...
of women since the dawn of life?
What is the fear they consider the worst,
calling out only piercing shrieks and cries?
It is their death. The ugliness.
A grave the swinging cradle,
turned to deathbed of loneliness,
genes displeased, karma prenatal.
Even the most affectionate soul,
the tender understanding angel,
would provoke rejection and foul,
disgust ridiculing the honest stranger.
It was Yordan Yovkov that said
Beauty is always a blessed exhuberance, ...
#loneliness
#beauty
#God
#Buddhist
#despair
590 reads
4 Comments
prometheus5290
Poem Published
21st Oct 2021 4:58am
21st Oct 2021 4:58am
Growth is a Lofty Goal
My anger
is a sign
that I'm wrong.
is a sign
that I'm wrong.
#Buddhist
#Taoism
401 reads
5 Comments
congress
Poem Published
25th Jul 2021 12:31pm
25th Jul 2021 12:31pm
Is it an orchestration and subtle alterations to the new normal?
Coronavirus: The Euphemism for Satanism!
Is birth rate our modern history?
Death tolls no longer mysteries?
Birth rate has decreased,
Death toll has increased!
Jobs have been seized!
The enemy is man-made;
Loved ones left for days.
What a deadly pandemic!
A Truth speaker is lunatic!
News believers are fantastic!
New order ushered new teachings!
People are ready for this new religion!
Regulations are gazetted every season!
New laws sets new norms within the prism! ...
Is birth rate our modern history?
Death tolls no longer mysteries?
Birth rate has decreased,
Death toll has increased!
Jobs have been seized!
The enemy is man-made;
Loved ones left for days.
What a deadly pandemic!
A Truth speaker is lunatic!
News believers are fantastic!
New order ushered new teachings!
People are ready for this new religion!
Regulations are gazetted every season!
New laws sets new norms within the prism! ...
#religion
#Christian
#Buddhist
#Taoism
#Hindu
367 reads
0 Comments
prometheus5290
Poem Published
5th May 2021 3:26am
5th May 2021 3:26am
not non-contradiction
A chicken
cannot be a snake
until that snake
eats that chicken.
cannot be a snake
until that snake
eats that chicken.
#Buddhist
#funny
361 reads
2 Comments
Razzerleaf
Poem Published
26th Mar 2021 9:24pm
26th Mar 2021 9:24pm
A town called Transcendence
Sapling’s rise from the forest floor
In times when trees can walk no more.
They teach the ways of root and leaf
and cut the ragweed from belief.
As sure as sun will bring the rain
the laws of droplets can be changed.
The owl that turns his head to see
will be at one with all that breathe.
A flower-bud bursts into life
the bloom so bright it carries light,
a cry announced into the world,
yet still the blossom starts to curl.
Of spiders that rebuild each web
and walk the path step by step,
with...
In times when trees can walk no more.
They teach the ways of root and leaf
and cut the ragweed from belief.
As sure as sun will bring the rain
the laws of droplets can be changed.
The owl that turns his head to see
will be at one with all that breathe.
A flower-bud bursts into life
the bloom so bright it carries light,
a cry announced into the world,
yet still the blossom starts to curl.
Of spiders that rebuild each web
and walk the path step by step,
with...
#Buddhist
575 reads
0 Comments
javalini
Poem Published
25th Mar 2021 12:15pm
25th Mar 2021 12:15pm
A POEM ABOUT MIND FULLNESS
ain't no quiet in here, mama
'cause this monkey don't sleep
and there ain't enough wisdom
in the whole buddha-wise world of dog eared books
to reign that rank beast in
and so there ain't no quiet jasmine scented peace
like what i wished for
'til i learn to hear past it
and that ain't no kinhin in the park
(that's a joke)
like i got these clouds rollin'
thick and ominous
as the ocean from whence they sprung
rumblin' rat grey and troubling this anxious mind
and a worried sailor takes to the bridge ...
'cause this monkey don't sleep
and there ain't enough wisdom
in the whole buddha-wise world of dog eared books
to reign that rank beast in
and so there ain't no quiet jasmine scented peace
like what i wished for
'til i learn to hear past it
and that ain't no kinhin in the park
(that's a joke)
like i got these clouds rollin'
thick and ominous
as the ocean from whence they sprung
rumblin' rat grey and troubling this anxious mind
and a worried sailor takes to the bridge ...
#Buddhist
#funny
#myself
359 reads
6 Comments
slipalong
Poem Published
24th Mar 2021 4:11pm
24th Mar 2021 4:11pm
Paths of need
for I am each, and they are me
the cosmos one true entity.
Each footfall on the cobbled street
a child's first step
the wire without a safety-net
Dry tomes, wise words
inner gears that spin a web,
distractions as they flow and ebb.
Distance never hold's the unlocked door
with just a push, its truths outpour.
The embodiment of nature's ease
searching for the inner self.
The endless tides that wash the kelp
a constancy to be refreshed.
Barefoot through torment; fingers numb
the rock face yields no grip ...
the cosmos one true entity.
Each footfall on the cobbled street
a child's first step
the wire without a safety-net
Dry tomes, wise words
inner gears that spin a web,
distractions as they flow and ebb.
Distance never hold's the unlocked door
with just a push, its truths outpour.
The embodiment of nature's ease
searching for the inner self.
The endless tides that wash the kelp
a constancy to be refreshed.
Barefoot through torment; fingers numb
the rock face yields no grip ...
#Buddhist
358 reads
4 Comments
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