Poems for and About Best Friends by Top Critiquers
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Poems for and about best friends by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
just brings it all home
office party wasn't particularly good last christmas I ever spend with zoom capturing me naked
in the wardrobe with my wife ..
in the wardrobe with my wife ..
#BestFriend
#friendship
#lover
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Recapturing
Christmas has passed,
and the new year approaches.
I encroach upon you
with a belated text.
The pretext is the weather
to remind you
of everything we have been through.
The snow was our serenity.
Snowflakes fall, and I
want you to know that I walk
for blocks in the symphony
of the busy streets alone.
I have a bittersweet
but upbeat feeling reading your reply.
You have established roots
where it does not snow.
Still, I hope the fruits of your labor
are savored and receive water from the oasis.
I...
and the new year approaches.
I encroach upon you
with a belated text.
The pretext is the weather
to remind you
of everything we have been through.
The snow was our serenity.
Snowflakes fall, and I
want you to know that I walk
for blocks in the symphony
of the busy streets alone.
I have a bittersweet
but upbeat feeling reading your reply.
You have established roots
where it does not snow.
Still, I hope the fruits of your labor
are savored and receive water from the oasis.
I...
#BestFriend
#betrayal
#IMissYou #TimeHeals
#IMissYou #TimeHeals
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16 Comments
Poetry...After Dark
What kind of hold do you have on me woman?
There are nights when you’re all over my mind
I feel a lil’ thrill when I spill with this kind of quill I just
I just don’t know
I don’t know
I guess I need keep digging this mine
Searching for mine
I’ve been through this door before
(Un momentito por favor)
Playing audio on the scenario as I go on to the next line
I’m not sure
I’d say be kind and rewind
But nobody uses any tape anymore
Been searching for mine
No rhyme or pun intended
But I think it’s kind of...
There are nights when you’re all over my mind
I feel a lil’ thrill when I spill with this kind of quill I just
I just don’t know
I don’t know
I guess I need keep digging this mine
Searching for mine
I’ve been through this door before
(Un momentito por favor)
Playing audio on the scenario as I go on to the next line
I’m not sure
I’d say be kind and rewind
But nobody uses any tape anymore
Been searching for mine
No rhyme or pun intended
But I think it’s kind of...
#love
#BestFriend
#sensual
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4 Comments
short note to a beloved friend under the weather
rest
heal
miss
you
love
you
heal
miss
you
love
you
#BestFriend
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8 Comments
Chaotic Universe
I still recall her red hair and distinctive flavor.
Chaotic!
She made you hold your breath!
The colorful memory of the vibrant scenery!
The astonishment she gave colliding,
As play challenged and relaxed her face,
As on the heights and lows of the hologram, conceived on
human flesh!
As on heartfull beat,
Ever-expanding,
She emitted the sparkle of bouncing stars,
Beautifully unshaped.
Like the universe!
Chaotic!
She made you hold your breath!
The colorful memory of the vibrant scenery!
The astonishment she gave colliding,
As play challenged and relaxed her face,
As on the heights and lows of the hologram, conceived on
human flesh!
As on heartfull beat,
Ever-expanding,
She emitted the sparkle of bouncing stars,
Beautifully unshaped.
Like the universe!
#BestFriend
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2 Comments
My Quebec Princess
My Quebec Princess
Blue Montreal midnight
For primrose lady
Fallen into Erebus’ embrace
Veins on fire with hurt
Corpuscles burning a path
Through blood vessel boughs
In her tree of tears
When even Wiccan prayers
Can’t make the nightmare go away
Whose ghouls haunt her horoscope
With Sagittarius monsters
A tarot reading
She never suspected
When in the tempest of puberty
She felt like a passing gale
That surely wouldn’t last
Past the turning of the Zodiac wheel
That offered no reprieve ...
Blue Montreal midnight
For primrose lady
Fallen into Erebus’ embrace
Veins on fire with hurt
Corpuscles burning a path
Through blood vessel boughs
In her tree of tears
When even Wiccan prayers
Can’t make the nightmare go away
Whose ghouls haunt her horoscope
With Sagittarius monsters
A tarot reading
She never suspected
When in the tempest of puberty
She felt like a passing gale
That surely wouldn’t last
Past the turning of the Zodiac wheel
That offered no reprieve ...
#BestFriend
#love
#women
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I can't tell you it's love
You call me
looking for answers
but wanting reassurances
that your heart beats the right way
and that your boyfriend
isn't a manipulative
semi-violent fucktard
unable to manage his insecurities
I tell you our childhoods
make us colourblind
and that for all the good green days
the red shine brighter
than your eyes (and heart)
can see
I would tell you
you're codependent
but you already know that
and it would make me a hypocrite
There are too many reasons
we stay when...
looking for answers
but wanting reassurances
that your heart beats the right way
and that your boyfriend
isn't a manipulative
semi-violent fucktard
unable to manage his insecurities
I tell you our childhoods
make us colourblind
and that for all the good green days
the red shine brighter
than your eyes (and heart)
can see
I would tell you
you're codependent
but you already know that
and it would make me a hypocrite
There are too many reasons
we stay when...
#abuse
#BestFriend
#DomesticViolence #support
#DomesticViolence #support
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Splendid company during an apocalypse
Pictures of you
Chasing the tide
Riding ebony mares
Foam glistening beneath orange
pink hues
Invigorating mist
Unseen dragons breath
Calm
Though tempest fury
Surely follows such moments
Symphonic lightening crashes
Serenades illuminated shadows
From the shelter of caverns wall
Two green peas in a pod
Subsiding on nettles
Supping dew drops
Carefree
Arm in arm
Watching the oncoming storm
Chasing the tide
Riding ebony mares
Foam glistening beneath orange
pink hues
Invigorating mist
Unseen dragons breath
Calm
Though tempest fury
Surely follows such moments
Symphonic lightening crashes
Serenades illuminated shadows
From the shelter of caverns wall
Two green peas in a pod
Subsiding on nettles
Supping dew drops
Carefree
Arm in arm
Watching the oncoming storm
#love
#BestFriend
#gratitude
#support
#PopCulture
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Friendship
Tonight my thoughts are focus on the meaning of friendship. And what it means to be a friend to someone. I am some what distressed over it. And I will not hide the fact that I am hurt, I seem to attract undeserving friends. I am a very generous person, I am blessed with the ability to turn compassion into active action. Loyalty is a great ability that I manifest in my flesh. My love is enduring sacrificial and binding. Yet my love is met with deception, treachery, my kindness met with greed. My friendship unappreciated. I have no friends I am friends to others, that are not a friend of mine....
#BestFriend
#relationships
#friendship
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2 Comments
Papa Noel aka Santa
My friend dresses as Papa Noel.
That's Santa to you & me.
O how splendid and dandy he looks.
He spread love and joviality.
Where ever he goes & no Yo Ho Ho.
Papa Noel ask me to be his elf.
Glad i was sure to be.
I dressed for the part.
I became his drunken ellifer.
So in the zone i became.
More convincing I was.
Liability I seemed to be.
A musketeer saw me appear.
rang away to tell the queen.
Papa strode up I lurched behind
Happy to be Santa's gimp.
Cause it put...
That's Santa to you & me.
O how splendid and dandy he looks.
He spread love and joviality.
Where ever he goes & no Yo Ho Ho.
Papa Noel ask me to be his elf.
Glad i was sure to be.
I dressed for the part.
I became his drunken ellifer.
So in the zone i became.
More convincing I was.
Liability I seemed to be.
A musketeer saw me appear.
rang away to tell the queen.
Papa strode up I lurched behind
Happy to be Santa's gimp.
Cause it put...
#BestFriend
#Christmas
#love #support
#love #support
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Case Of Sibling Rivalry From One Side
My best friend
told me that his little
brother is becoming his father's
favorite child more and more because that kid does
not complain about what his dad does
to support his entire
family.
told me that his little
brother is becoming his father's
favorite child more and more because that kid does
not complain about what his dad does
to support his entire
family.
#BestFriend
#dialogue
#family
#fiction
#suffering
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DU Poetry : Poems for and About Best Friends by Top Critiquers