BDSM Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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BDSM seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
16th Oct 2024 1:46pm
16th Oct 2024 1:46pm
Jenny’s Dream Manifesting
#BDSM
#seductive
#sensual
216 reads
15 Comments
dead_lluwi
Poem Published
5th Oct 2024 2:57pm
5th Oct 2024 2:57pm
im yours
I'll give you my heart for you to hold.
Do as you do, I'll do as I'm told.
Your sickly sweet words that drown me down.
Pleasurable chains that kept me around.
Keep me chained to show me love.
Imprison me like a little dove.
Fill me with desire like a burning fire.
One thing’s for sure, you're my pacifier.
I can’t believe that I wrote this during the month of love. The month of love– the world has betrayed me by giving me the chance to talk to him again. The world has become cruel yet again. World, will you please spare this girl who’s lost...
Do as you do, I'll do as I'm told.
Your sickly sweet words that drown me down.
Pleasurable chains that kept me around.
Keep me chained to show me love.
Imprison me like a little dove.
Fill me with desire like a burning fire.
One thing’s for sure, you're my pacifier.
I can’t believe that I wrote this during the month of love. The month of love– the world has betrayed me by giving me the chance to talk to him again. The world has become cruel yet again. World, will you please spare this girl who’s lost...
#BDSM
#bittersweet
#IMissYou
#obsession
#passion
312 reads
0 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
4th Oct 2024 12:35pm
4th Oct 2024 12:35pm
Before Coffee
Waking up to the scent of ecstasy
reaching over to my right, puppies lying next to me
So, the other had to be making what I Need
But my body seems to want something else in greed
Pushing his hand toward the apex and moving time
Awakening and obediently doing what I desire
circling and spreading lips to make me climb higher
the other walks through the door
See what puppy is doing and wants to do it before
“Come to me and take what you want.”
As a servant...
reaching over to my right, puppies lying next to me
So, the other had to be making what I Need
But my body seems to want something else in greed
Pushing his hand toward the apex and moving time
Awakening and obediently doing what I desire
circling and spreading lips to make me climb higher
the other walks through the door
See what puppy is doing and wants to do it before
“Come to me and take what you want.”
As a servant...
#BDSM
#dirty
#erotic
505 reads
26 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
3rd Oct 2024 11:47pm
3rd Oct 2024 11:47pm
The place I want to be
#BDSM
#erotic
#passion
#sexy
#temptation
408 reads
0 Comments
runningturtle87
Poem Published
3rd Oct 2024 10:36am
3rd Oct 2024 10:36am
Defining the Ego
Defining the Ego
What need
are we feeding
when eating?
We eat
for a reason,
even unconsciously,
even
in the patterns
of our shynesses
hidden
within our affectations
of abrasiveness
to disguise
the fear
of our being
inferior,
imagined
or real.
What need
are we feeding
when eating?
We eat
for a reason,
even unconsciously,
even
in the patterns
of our shynesses
hidden
within our affectations
of abrasiveness
to disguise
the fear
of our being
inferior,
imagined
or real.
#BDSM
197 reads
3 Comments
runningturtle87
Poem Published
3rd Oct 2024 10:25am
3rd Oct 2024 10:25am
Mapping Humanity
Mapping Humanity
Ideas
of beauty
in cyborg
utopia
grow
like a garden
only lightly
attended.
Ideas
of beauty
in cyborg
utopia
grow
like a garden
only lightly
attended.
#BDSM
120 reads
2 Comments
runningturtle87
Poem Published
2nd Oct 2024 8:28pm
2nd Oct 2024 8:28pm
Is It Ever Going to Be Real
Is It Ever Going to Be Real
He ran
to the light
on the corner
near her house
to meet her
there
and start
the beginning
of all
that could be.
She
flatly
leaned
on the side
of the mailbox
where she
had routed
him,
though
when he
got there
he found
her poster,
life-sized
but not living.
This
was
the 4th time
she had
tricked him,
but now
she was serious,
yet he...
He ran
to the light
on the corner
near her house
to meet her
there
and start
the beginning
of all
that could be.
She
flatly
leaned
on the side
of the mailbox
where she
had routed
him,
though
when he
got there
he found
her poster,
life-sized
but not living.
This
was
the 4th time
she had
tricked him,
but now
she was serious,
yet he...
#BDSM
#orgasm
200 reads
0 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
1st Oct 2024 10:52pm
1st Oct 2024 10:52pm
Brushing your hair
#BDSM
#erotic
#sensual #sex
#sensual #sex
261 reads
2 Comments
Pete_25
Poem Published
1st Oct 2024 8:09am
1st Oct 2024 8:09am
Madam Blackhearts
Don't know what I'm doing here
Bondage whip excess
Dutch courage, one more beer
Help, I'm in distress!
She gives out evil if you're good
"LICK THIS LEATHER DRESS"
A dark heart spills black blood
Her pierced tongue knows what's best
"YOU'RE MY SLAVE, YOU ARE WEAK
MY MIND IS SO OBSESSED
UNZIP MY CROTCH, TAKE A PEEK
DO WHAT I SAY UNLESS!"
"GET YOUR FACE UNDERNEATH MY BUM
LIFT THIS LEATHER DRESS
HOLD ON TIGHT, I'M ABOUT TO COME ...
Bondage whip excess
Dutch courage, one more beer
Help, I'm in distress!
She gives out evil if you're good
"LICK THIS LEATHER DRESS"
A dark heart spills black blood
Her pierced tongue knows what's best
"YOU'RE MY SLAVE, YOU ARE WEAK
MY MIND IS SO OBSESSED
UNZIP MY CROTCH, TAKE A PEEK
DO WHAT I SAY UNLESS!"
"GET YOUR FACE UNDERNEATH MY BUM
LIFT THIS LEATHER DRESS
HOLD ON TIGHT, I'M ABOUT TO COME ...
#BDSM
#dirty
#erotic #lust
#erotic #lust
276 reads
7 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
30th Sep 2024 6:38pm
30th Sep 2024 6:38pm
Come To Me
Come to me with no pretension
With no entitlement
With no demands
And you will be rewarded.
With no entitlement
With no demands
And you will be rewarded.
#BDSM
#seductive
#sensual
452 reads
19 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
29th Sep 2024 11:56pm
29th Sep 2024 11:56pm
Weekend full of fun
#BDSM
#dirty
#erotic
#lust
#orgasm
284 reads
0 Comments
Kinkwizard_95
Poem Published
29th Sep 2024 00:16am
29th Sep 2024 00:16am
Freak
Don’t look at me
Don’t speak
Now kneel for me
You freak
I’m gonna get the whips out
The bullet and the boy
Need to show this girl the rules
Make her my own toy
You better just sit there
Be quiet, toot sweet.
Gonna tie your hands up
Make you my own freak
Don’t speak
Now kneel for me
You freak
I’m gonna get the whips out
The bullet and the boy
Need to show this girl the rules
Make her my own toy
You better just sit there
Be quiet, toot sweet.
Gonna tie your hands up
Make you my own freak
#BDSM
#erotic
#sex
286 reads
4 Comments
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