BDSM Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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FATBOY300PLUS
Poem Published
Today 11:35am
Today 11:35am
FCKN
Deep inside you
And there's no place else I'd rather be
Tender touch be damned
I'm pouring on the coals
as this inferno consumes me
And
as the tremors take hold during my moment of greatest satisfaction
My fingers close fiercely upon her beautiful Brown neck
Stealing her air with force
nearly equal to the power of each pulse from her puss
as it greedily milks me of my steaming liquid seed
And there's no place else I'd rather be
Tender touch be damned
I'm pouring on the coals
as this inferno consumes me
And
as the tremors take hold during my moment of greatest satisfaction
My fingers close fiercely upon her beautiful Brown neck
Stealing her air with force
nearly equal to the power of each pulse from her puss
as it greedily milks me of my steaming liquid seed
#BDSM
#erotic
#love #sensual
#love #sensual
38 reads
1 Comment
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
Yesterday 00:33am
Yesterday 00:33am
Top Shelf pt 3 (Twist and Final)
#BDSM
#dirty
#lust
#sex
#sexy
140 reads
14 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
26th Jan 2025 11:57pm
26th Jan 2025 11:57pm
Role play swop
#BDSM
#erotic
#lust
#passion
#temptation
97 reads
2 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
25th Jan 2025 11:20pm
25th Jan 2025 11:20pm
First session
#BDSM
#erotic
#lust
#passion
#temptation
175 reads
0 Comments
MasterG
Poem Published
24th Jan 2025 3:57am
24th Jan 2025 3:57am
My Queen
I take you as mine
There is nothing left but time
Your beauty is unmatched
Your spirit is unscratched
You now belong to me
There is nowhere to flee
I am your Master
You are my slave
I take what I want
You give without pause
I care for your wants
Strive for your needs
You submit to my lead
I protect your body and soul
You call me your Master
I call you mine
To protect and to hold
Come to your Master
My Girl
My Love
My Queen
There is nothing left but time
Your beauty is unmatched
Your spirit is unscratched
You now belong to me
There is nowhere to flee
I am your Master
You are my slave
I take what I want
You give without pause
I care for your wants
Strive for your needs
You submit to my lead
I protect your body and soul
You call me your Master
I call you mine
To protect and to hold
Come to your Master
My Girl
My Love
My Queen
#BDSM
166 reads
0 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
22nd Jan 2025 11:58pm
22nd Jan 2025 11:58pm
The first actual strike
#BDSM
#erotic
#lust
#passion
#temptation
131 reads
0 Comments
runningturtle87
Poem Published
20th Jan 2025 2:52am
20th Jan 2025 2:52am
In the Crumbs
In the Crumbs
It's our senselessness
that is the hallmark
of our nature;
every sacred moment....
burnt,
and every intimacy
and integration are left
in the crumbs
of the coals.
It's our senselessness
that is the hallmark
of our nature;
every sacred moment....
burnt,
and every intimacy
and integration are left
in the crumbs
of the coals.
#BDSM
#lust
#passion
150 reads
2 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
19th Jan 2025 11:17pm
19th Jan 2025 11:17pm
Open up my eyes
#BDSM
#dirty
#erotic
#lust
#sexy
198 reads
2 Comments
runningturtle87
Poem Published
19th Jan 2025 7:50am
19th Jan 2025 7:50am
A Few Tornadoes
A Few Tornadoes
It seems
only a matter
of some discussion
before the wires
are crossed,
and,
at
that
point,
beyond which
memory
can hold its head up,
resilient winds
can bare
withstand the charms
of those
wobegone days
in a few tornadoes.
Our losses then
make all the more
this rarer field,
these fireflies
and
daily shield.
It seems
only a matter
of some discussion
before the wires
are crossed,
and,
at
that
point,
beyond which
memory
can hold its head up,
resilient winds
can bare
withstand the charms
of those
wobegone days
in a few tornadoes.
Our losses then
make all the more
this rarer field,
these fireflies
and
daily shield.
#BDSM
#passion
#temptation
137 reads
0 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
19th Jan 2025 3:14am
19th Jan 2025 3:14am
Submissive scholar
#BDSM
#dirty
#erotic
#passion
#temptation
217 reads
0 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
17th Jan 2025 11:10pm
17th Jan 2025 11:10pm
Let's go to the woods
#BDSM
#erotic
#lust
#passion
#temptation
203 reads
0 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
17th Jan 2025 00:57am
17th Jan 2025 00:57am
No choice silent voice
#BDSM
#erotic
#lust
#passion
#sexy
168 reads
0 Comments
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