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Life
Life is many things
Life is everything
Life is hard to describe
But many have tried
Life is ever changing
It moves around like a pebble in a pond
The pages fly by like your favorite book
It slips through your fingers without a trace
Never know if it will get better or worse
Life has no definate purpose
Many relly on destiny
Some on fate
Others make there own paths
Most just crumble under its pressure
-Cody Hall
Life is everything
Life is hard to describe
But many have tried
Life is ever changing
It moves around like a pebble in a pond
The pages fly by like your favorite book
It slips through your fingers without a trace
Never know if it will get better or worse
Life has no definate purpose
Many relly on destiny
Some on fate
Others make there own paths
Most just crumble under its pressure
-Cody Hall
Published 29th Sep 2010
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29th Sep 2010 4:38am
I don't think I did a very good job with this poem. I usually write about passion and love
29th Sep 2010 10:42am
It is a good poem dear. It contains the ABCs of poetry. As for the XYZs, ask another poet.
Thanks for posting.
Thanks for posting.
