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I can’t find a plural for the word “you”.
If we
just
lay it out
on a table
The truth would be
something as ridiculous
as you stole
my marriage
[and I loved it]
I’d do it again too…
over
and
over
It’s most likely
that my pen
wrote the future
in a history context
I’m not claiming to be Houdini
but
she’d have stayed
if I never met you
or
studied your panties
while I
wrote
her goddam
end
You’re just a bucket of lust
that’s why I love
you
Then again
I don’t write the truth
I do
butterflies, flowers
birds, worms
and
bees.
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Re: I can’t find a plural for the word “you”.
1st Apr 2013 3:01pm
re: Re: I can’t find a plural for the word “you”.
4th Apr 2013 8:24pm
Good to see you Doc.
Thanks for stopping by
Glad you like the title...
;]
Thanks for stopping by
Glad you like the title...
;]
Re: I can’t find a plural for the word “you”.
1st Apr 2013 3:20pm
From this point is where you brought it home for me -
"It’s most likely
that my pen
wrote the future
in a history context
I’m not claiming to be Houdini
but
she’d have stayed
if I never met you
or
studied your panties
while I
wrote
her goddam
end
You’re just a bucket of lust
that’s why I love
you
Then again
I don’t write the truth
I do
butterflies, flowers
birds, worms
and
bees."
Thoroughly enjoyed the read :)
"It’s most likely
that my pen
wrote the future
in a history context
I’m not claiming to be Houdini
but
she’d have stayed
if I never met you
or
studied your panties
while I
wrote
her goddam
end
You’re just a bucket of lust
that’s why I love
you
Then again
I don’t write the truth
I do
butterflies, flowers
birds, worms
and
bees."
Thoroughly enjoyed the read :)
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re: Re: I can’t find a plural for the word “you”.
4th Apr 2013 8:26pm
Hey Maggie..
Well what can one say after a comment like that.
Thank you for your kind words
much love -x-
Well what can one say after a comment like that.
Thank you for your kind words
much love -x-
Re: I can’t find a plural for the word “you”.
1st Apr 2013 3:38pm
ah,wonderful
love story...
eye
love a good sappy
sent
I
mental lovestory.......
o,yes,& to answer yr grammatical question, it's
simply
"yous"
ala "yous guys" wee say in Brooklyn for couple hundred years now
love story...
eye
love a good sappy
sent
I
mental lovestory.......
o,yes,& to answer yr grammatical question, it's
simply
"yous"
ala "yous guys" wee say in Brooklyn for couple hundred years now
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re: Re: I can’t find a plural for the word “you”.
2nd Jun 2015 3:42pm
Thanks for the com-ment, me Brooklyn mate.
Ai to the love of the loving
;)
Ai to the love of the loving
;)
Re: I can’t find a plural for the word “you”.
6th Apr 2013 2:42pm
Hay thanks... Houdinis Murderers lately in the Rolling Stones magazine was said to be "Psychix MAfia""thay revealed after all these decades "i do it with dung beetles"' loved your poem thank you !!1
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re: Re: I can’t find a plural for the word “you”.
2nd Jun 2015 3:43pm
Re: I can’t find a plural for the word “you”.
20th Nov 2013 8:57pm
I don't even know how to say how good this is.
this:
If we
just
lay it out
on a table
The truth would be
something as ridiculous
as you stole
my marriage
[and I loved it]
is perfect!!
this:
If we
just
lay it out
on a table
The truth would be
something as ridiculous
as you stole
my marriage
[and I loved it]
is perfect!!
1
re: Re: I can’t find a plural for the word “you”.
2nd Jun 2015 3:44pm
Re. I can’t find a plural for the word “you”.
20th Aug 2017 2:15am
I love the bright lust feeling about it, its just the I read "Houdini" I just remembered after 80 years they found out he did not drown on his show he was burnt alive. Great poem have. browse on my work if you want I need the criticism. Thank you
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