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Volcano
My body is like a volcano when i erupt
Everything around me vibrate's the
walls feel like an airplane flying over
My body is like a volcano when i erupt
The windows shake like a train is
coming in full force
My body is like a volcano when i erupt
All my juices flow like im niagara falls
My body is like a volcano when i erupt
Everything around me vibrate's the
walls feel like an airplane flying over
My body is like a volcano when i erupt
The windows shake like a train is
coming in full force
My body is like a volcano when i erupt
All my juices flow like im niagara falls
My body is like a volcano when i erupt
Published 27th Mar 2013
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27th Mar 2013 9:41am
Filled with similes... and I like the piece, although I'd say the line "My body is like a volcano when i erupt" looks and sounds like its a redundancy rather than emphasizing statement. Nice work though.
~SML
~SML
27th Mar 2013 10:44am
Mmmmmmmm.........shall I be a witness? A seismic release in short form. Very nice~
27th Mar 2013 9:54pm
28th Mar 2013 10:35am
