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One with the sun
watching from afar
moving outwards in space
world entombed by our star
this is our planets fate
come back to being
one with the sun
return to the beginning
chemical bonds are undone
we melt in the sun
everything is lost
our hopes and dreams
nothing more than dust
nothing more than dust (we are)
nothing more than dust (we become)
Nothing more than dust (we are)
nothing more than dust
moving outwards in space
world entombed by our star
this is our planets fate
come back to being
one with the sun
return to the beginning
chemical bonds are undone
we melt in the sun
everything is lost
our hopes and dreams
nothing more than dust
nothing more than dust (we are)
nothing more than dust (we become)
Nothing more than dust (we are)
nothing more than dust
Published 22nd Mar 2013
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Anonymous
22nd Mar 2013 2:12pm
I like this..my only critique is that I think it really could use another verse but as a musician-I respect that some pieces are dominated by the chords much more than the lyrics..so all I can say is..it's good and with the right music-will be great.
Welcome to DUP, look forward to reading more of your work
Welcome to DUP, look forward to reading more of your work
27th Mar 2013 2:20am
25th Feb 2024 1:52am
Whether we believe in creation or the Big Bang, this reminds me that we are indeed stardust.
Nice spill
Nice spill
