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Before Me
Sweet magic teardrop in the rain
Carry my whisper
Cold, so true.
Dream friend tonight.
sleep near the moon.
Make today old,
Ride a sunny hello.
You are soon to be blue.
Carry my whisper
Cold, so true.
Dream friend tonight.
sleep near the moon.
Make today old,
Ride a sunny hello.
You are soon to be blue.
Published 22nd Mar 2013
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Anonymous
22nd Mar 2013 2:36am
I won't pretend to be able to translate but I really like these lines. Particularly the first five. They come across like the seeing the glitter on waves, where you can't see into the water but know there's depth hidden below.
22nd Mar 2013 12:01pm
I don't know what to say to that except that that is an awesome way to describe it.
