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Takes me out the way
This thing it takes me out the way
I breathe deep
It makes my stomach hurt
The feeling of cold air twisting through hollow depth
The ache is unbearable
And it takes me out the way
But does it?
Or is it a moment of reality
the truth
The moment I know it's all wrong
and then I realize its really reality that's takes me out the way
A fake smile wading through a fake pile of what's real
And through the day I breathe deep
again, again and again
and it hurts
and I know the truth
and its unbearable
So I continue to return to reality
Because it takes me out the way
I breathe deep
It makes my stomach hurt
The feeling of cold air twisting through hollow depth
The ache is unbearable
And it takes me out the way
But does it?
Or is it a moment of reality
the truth
The moment I know it's all wrong
and then I realize its really reality that's takes me out the way
A fake smile wading through a fake pile of what's real
And through the day I breathe deep
again, again and again
and it hurts
and I know the truth
and its unbearable
So I continue to return to reality
Because it takes me out the way
Published 21st Mar 2013
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21st Mar 2013 2:53pm
yes....'reality' pretty tricky in the midst of 7 billion interpretations of 'what it is'----
cool rit
might wanna take the 'e' out of wading, (or not)
cool rit
might wanna take the 'e' out of wading, (or not)
21st Mar 2013 3:42pm
Thanks DanielX . I'm pleased you read it. I have been reading your poems for a couple months now. I'm finally getting the just of how the site works and learned I could follow you. :)
