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Distance
Distance can kill me
I swear distance is the center of all my misery
I fell in love with you somehow
And your all I'm thinking about right now
I love you so much
And wish I could just feel your touch
I love you
And I know its all I can do
So wait for me
And someday we'll be happy
I swear distance is the center of all my misery
I fell in love with you somehow
And your all I'm thinking about right now
I love you so much
And wish I could just feel your touch
I love you
And I know its all I can do
So wait for me
And someday we'll be happy
Published 21st Mar 2013
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Anonymous
21st Mar 2013 3:46am
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21st Mar 2013 4:01am
Nice poem, I can totally relate...
As of the style, I would work with the rhythm of the words to make it smoother.
As of the style, I would work with the rhythm of the words to make it smoother.
21st Mar 2013 4:01am
Love this! I can relate to this so much, left my home some time ago as well as my first real love.
Anonymous
21st Mar 2013 4:27am
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