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where are you dearest?
where must you be?
where would you be if you weren't in my mind..?
† to my dearest 22/2/2010
where must you be?
where would you be if you weren't in my mind..?
† to my dearest 22/2/2010
Published 20th Sep 2010
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20th Sep 2010 4:33pm
An interesting thought. And the very short length sets up just enough to start you thinking, then leaves you to it.
Anonymous
21st Sep 2010 3:14pm
Your work is so simple and stripped of pretension, yet conveys these beautiful, melancholy thoughts. Anyone who can capture a lifetime's grief, or love, or pain, or joy, in three staccato lines, is an excellent poet. And you're a master of haiku without even knowing it, I think, as this piece alone could be considered a fine entry in that genre.
22nd Sep 2010 12:07pm
im so grateful for your words my dear jack. to tell you the truth i never thought of this poem as a haiku! i thought it was a bit too big to be considered as one of them! but if you say it is who am i to say otherwise :)
