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Fear
I'm frightened by the sound of the telephone
ringing, thinking it might be you.
I'm frightened again by your words cause
they're capable of raping my soul
a thousand times..
ringing, thinking it might be you.
I'm frightened again by your words cause
they're capable of raping my soul
a thousand times..
Published 6th Sep 2010
| Edited 21st Jun 2012
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6th Sep 2010 4:50pm
6th Sep 2010 6:51pm
a fear i think most of us can relate to.
they should have a name for it.
they should have a name for it.
6th Sep 2010 9:06pm
6th Sep 2010 11:56pm
''I'm frightened again by your words
cause
they're capable of raping my soul
a thousand times'' that is like..effing amazing..i love that line yet sad because sometimes words have the power to do that
cause
they're capable of raping my soul
a thousand times'' that is like..effing amazing..i love that line yet sad because sometimes words have the power to do that
Anonymous
7th Sep 2010 00:33am
Powerful because of it's shortness and simplicity. You convey terror with great skill and ease.
7th Sep 2010 2:41am
i like think its a really powerful vision of the soul being raped.. good job hun
7th Sep 2010 5:40pm
21st Nov 2010 2:55pm
"frightened again by your words cause
they're capable of raping my soul
a thousand times.."
words capable of raping your soul a thousand times. very strong line. i'm frightened for you. strong poem...
they're capable of raping my soul
a thousand times.."
words capable of raping your soul a thousand times. very strong line. i'm frightened for you. strong poem...
