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M'dream'o NobleChivalry
heyhey,look'a'me,looky
looky....me is me as[a]
FalseKnight OnTheeRoad
in b r o ad
d aylight sunshine
b right ,
toas'toastin[in]
man[ly]metalArmours(amours),
lookalike
thee'old ye'olde toaster
on1960Bklyn kit'chentalble[it sure
weren't rrrround)&
roundnround'au-go-go
gone..........Lo!
'my road',it be thee B.Q.E! Right a'nex'to
thee castle'ic white BushTerminal!
sacredspire(that church'thing,yknow?)
of Czestochowa(OurLady) vis'ible not-too-far,
as G'odd blessed noble'steed go unto
dropdead...he+swarmin flyfly'flies
snnnnnnnarlin up Angry Trafficxs,
SincereFalseKnight, I, clankedly stum
ble,a'bake'd [in]selfcontain'd Oven,
joustylance all limpid'n'broke,
bump tarnishygreenbrown'railng & pi'vot
over theedge,fallin most innocently
35-40feets down t'3rdAvenue's
pave
ment- whata fckn clatterclang crash'o
r us t i ng junk !
all pretensions done'undone....over&done be dream ,
such
as-it-is,or was
as such
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Published 16th Mar 2013
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16th Mar 2013 10:20pm
Ah yes - armour can be quite vexing (whichever pronunciation one chooses)But perservere poetic Pellinore - for certainly at the pivotal denouement an arm clothed in white samite shall spring forth from a nearby manhole, brandishing a can-opener and so you shall be set free from thy toasty tuetonic trappings-(hows THAT for illeration?)Enjoyed this one mightily- though I do have one small quibble- to my way of thinking sir Knight- "errant" you may be - but never false!
17th Mar 2013 2:44am
reading yr commentary is even mo'
f'un
than
my 'giving voice' to
my
drivelly th'oughthinkins----
never knowed pootery could be such
way way f u n
f'un
than
my 'giving voice' to
my
drivelly th'oughthinkins----
never knowed pootery could be such
way way f u n
17th Mar 2013 4:04am
I am told I possess a certain wit- which is good- because I could NEVER make it on my looks.
17th Mar 2013 1:53pm
so,like,man,
who
dfck is lookin anyways?
& who
among'em can see
for they's lookins?
Peace&Blessings,
I,KnitWit
who
dfck is lookin anyways?
& who
among'em can see
for they's lookins?
Peace&Blessings,
I,KnitWit
