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<3 Haiku.
The forest whispers,
I've beheaded the trees-
Silence.
Flesh lipped whore,
Plastic limbs-
Perfect.
Blasphemous lover,
Feels "good"-
Amen.
Twisted hearts-
Soft, and sensual irony.
Dead.
Dancing tongues,
Biting fetish;
Speechless.
I've beheaded the trees-
Silence.
Flesh lipped whore,
Plastic limbs-
Perfect.
Blasphemous lover,
Feels "good"-
Amen.
Twisted hearts-
Soft, and sensual irony.
Dead.
Dancing tongues,
Biting fetish;
Speechless.
Published 13th Sep 2010
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13th Sep 2010 8:43pm
Hey, thanks for reading, as usual commenting and critiquing is welcome and wanted. :D This is a compilation of random Haiku I have done, I hope you enjoy. Thanks again! ~Jade
14th Sep 2010 6:30am
These have a kind of biting wit to them...they cut things off quite effectively. I especially like how you cleanly slaughter the mysticism of the forest.
14th Sep 2010 6:51am
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14th Sep 2010 11:07pm
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14th Sep 2010 11:20pm
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15th Sep 2010 00:45am
The first one is my favourite. It's just so weirdly chilling, in a way I can't define. Just the image of all those "headless" trees somehow whispering. I don't know what made you think of that one, but I enjoy that mystery.
Thanks, the first is my favorite too. It does have an eery chill to it that I quite enjoy, and I am glad you agree. :) And to be honest, I don't quite know what inspired me to write it but I am very thankful that I did. Thanks for reading and commenting, I love it all. :D
7th Oct 2010 3:21pm
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