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Weak.
Intricate crimson ribbons flow hastily
down my spine, bidding me to collapse
upon the sodden Earth.
The world is at ease tonight as the silver
lining of our coffins bleed into every pore,
leaving a path of discreet destruction.
Cleansing breaths are corrosive for such
weak hearts to withhold. Careless candy
for the soul.
Your fingertips suture the wounds that I
so foolishly inflicted, it figures that I would
be so weak towards your advances.
To give into you would be the end of me.
And so the end I shall embrace.
down my spine, bidding me to collapse
upon the sodden Earth.
The world is at ease tonight as the silver
lining of our coffins bleed into every pore,
leaving a path of discreet destruction.
Cleansing breaths are corrosive for such
weak hearts to withhold. Careless candy
for the soul.
Your fingertips suture the wounds that I
so foolishly inflicted, it figures that I would
be so weak towards your advances.
To give into you would be the end of me.
And so the end I shall embrace.
Published 11th Sep 2010
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Anonymous
11th Sep 2010 11:04pm
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14th Sep 2010 2:27pm
14th Sep 2010 7:24pm
Thanks, I am SO glad you liked it, I mean, after all you guys are who I write for, lol. :D
30th Sep 2010 6:49am
i like alot of your work but this one really stands out to me. Especally the ending! I loved it! :)
30th Sep 2010 6:58am
Thanks a lot Undercover Angel! This piece is a bit random but in a weird way it makes sense. But that's just me, lol. :P Thanks for reading, commenting, and loving! :D
Anonymous
21st Nov 2011 4:29pm
Intricate crimson ribbons flow hastily...
you can see the blood flowing through the words. They flow right through, like a river. It's beautiful. Moving.
you can see the blood flowing through the words. They flow right through, like a river. It's beautiful. Moving.
