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excuses, excuses
circles carved deep
submerged underground
to see something gained
as veins seep unbound
slain for the pleasure
to measure the pain
for fairier flesh was strained
submerged underground
to see something gained
as veins seep unbound
slain for the pleasure
to measure the pain
for fairier flesh was strained
Published 13th Sep 2010
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just had to tell you, i enjoyed the depth for something so short and the rhyme didn't feel the least bit trite. [:
