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COUPLE ON BEACH
On a beach where all shapes and sizes did throng,
Away from the hustle and bustle of Hong Kong,
With her in a bikini and him in his thong,
The couple looked straight out of the Solomon Song.
The couple had not been married very long:
They were so much in love that they saw nothing wrong
In displaying their affection that was so strong,
Their grips on each other seemed tighter than King Kong.
Away from the hustle and bustle of Hong Kong,
With her in a bikini and him in his thong,
The couple looked straight out of the Solomon Song.
The couple had not been married very long:
They were so much in love that they saw nothing wrong
In displaying their affection that was so strong,
Their grips on each other seemed tighter than King Kong.
Published 7th Mar 2013
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7th Mar 2013 10:25pm
8th Mar 2013 3:19am
I too couldn't help but smile as i read this..somehow feeling like a peeping tom lol..vivid lovely picture your words painted!
8th Mar 2013 5:22am
Fer God's sake tell then to get in the water! Much enjoyed and I remember those salty days, thanks!
They might have already been in the water - this is a picture of newlywed love. (Not autobiographical.) Might add a verse putting them in the water if I can think up four more lines with "-ong" endings!
9th Mar 2013 3:33pm
"belong" is all that comes to mind, barring a couple of pornographic "ong"s, cheers!
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8th Mar 2013 8:28am
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Anonymous
8th Mar 2013 12:40pm
You put us there solomon song
nice write
strider
nice write
strider
8th Mar 2013 6:15pm
8th Mar 2013 8:48pm
