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it isn't love
it isn't love that hurts
it is the fear of
losing love
the disappearing passion
the separation
or final break-up
that causes anguish
no, it isn't love
that hurts at all
it is the fear of
losing love
the disappearing passion
the separation
or final break-up
that causes anguish
no, it isn't love
that hurts at all
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Re: it isn't love
Anonymous
5th Mar 2013 2:34am
Well spoken truth. Love this short reality. :)
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re: Re: it isn't love
5th Mar 2013 2:49am
Thank you, my friend. I'm always happy to see you have graced my page with your presence! :)
Faith
Faith
Re: it isn't love
5th Mar 2013 3:35am
So very true Faith,
Reality hit home with this one, because most be say.."Love Hurts",
Thank you....Cassie
Reality hit home with this one, because most be say.."Love Hurts",
Thank you....Cassie
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re: Re: it isn't love
5th Mar 2013 3:45pm
Thank you for your lovely comments, Cassie. I really appreciate them. :)
Faith
Faith
re: Re: it isn't love
7th Mar 2013 2:15am
Re: it isn't love
Anonymous
5th Mar 2013 5:49am
A lovely write, Faith, with so much said in so few words! Finely penned, indeed! I enjoyed this poem a lot! :)
Carlene
Carlene
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re: Re: it isn't love
7th Mar 2013 2:16am
Re: it isn't love
5th Mar 2013 3:01pm
Re: it isn't love
5th Mar 2013 3:56pm
Re: it isn't love
6th Mar 2013 4:13pm
Aint that the truth, very wise words from your mystic pen.
cheers
marcus
cheers
marcus
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Re: it isn't love
Anonymous
6th Mar 2013 7:53pm
Yes, faith, you are very much wright...
It isnt Love, its what is under its surface.
Great write!
It isnt Love, its what is under its surface.
Great write!
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