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Violence,wisdom,so much regret.
It's funny how we haven't mastered talking yet.
I have been practicing,taking my time.
Watching to piece them together just right.
Into my eyes
then out of my mouth.
into the air
to travel with clouds
falling with rain
where needed,be found...
May my words help somehow.
It's funny how we haven't mastered talking yet.
I have been practicing,taking my time.
Watching to piece them together just right.
Into my eyes
then out of my mouth.
into the air
to travel with clouds
falling with rain
where needed,be found...
May my words help somehow.
Published 27th Feb 2013
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27th Feb 2013 1:46am
27th Feb 2013 9:24am
Anonymous
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27th Feb 2013 1:00pm
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Anonymous
- Edited 27th Feb 2013 5:38pm
27th Feb 2013 5:37pm
Man, a beaut.
Love this one, j!
Can never turn the back on words..are they powerful, or what.
Particularly love this part:
*It's funny how we haven't mastered talking yet.
(I'd venture to say we've mastered ..talking..alright, but true communication? Another tale in the twisted fray..)
Anyhow, swell effort, poet.
Keep-a at it, ok :)
Cheers
Tidespotter
Love this one, j!
Can never turn the back on words..are they powerful, or what.
Particularly love this part:
*It's funny how we haven't mastered talking yet.
(I'd venture to say we've mastered ..talking..alright, but true communication? Another tale in the twisted fray..)
Anyhow, swell effort, poet.
Keep-a at it, ok :)
Cheers
Tidespotter
27th Feb 2013 5:49pm
