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IN MEMORY OF HUMANITY
This one's for the red head girl,
living in the slum motel.
Her only source of fun,is a broken swing.
Mommy's in a rubber room,
daddy's sleeping off the booze.
Whenever he's awake,he wants to touch her again.
This ones for her day of birth.
Something changed here on the Earth.
This little girl from nowhere,is a martyr in blood.
Oh,she will keep her sanity,
Though you and I,HUMANITY,
will reap what we have sown,and never suffer enough.
living in the slum motel.
Her only source of fun,is a broken swing.
Mommy's in a rubber room,
daddy's sleeping off the booze.
Whenever he's awake,he wants to touch her again.
This ones for her day of birth.
Something changed here on the Earth.
This little girl from nowhere,is a martyr in blood.
Oh,she will keep her sanity,
Though you and I,HUMANITY,
will reap what we have sown,and never suffer enough.
Published 26th Feb 2013
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26th Feb 2013 8:20pm
Wow! By rubber room you mean prostitution? I think so! I like this. It's so playfully dark and interesting. The picture makes me think Chucky and the leaves make me think ghost but there's just a greyness about this poem that catches the eye. Great job J.
27th Feb 2013 00:54am
Anonymous
27th Feb 2013 1:14am
What a sad tale...but told so well...
Between a mother who is mentally ill
and a father who is an alcoholic...
who will take care of this child?
From my perspective this child
needs enormous resilience and talent
to overcome a problem with genetics
(mental illness may be inheritable and
so is alcoholism) and enviroment...extreme
poverty leads to nutritional and environmental deprivation.
The title is perfect
Well done
Between a mother who is mentally ill
and a father who is an alcoholic...
who will take care of this child?
From my perspective this child
needs enormous resilience and talent
to overcome a problem with genetics
(mental illness may be inheritable and
so is alcoholism) and enviroment...extreme
poverty leads to nutritional and environmental deprivation.
The title is perfect
Well done
Anonymous
- Edited 1st May 2021 7:45am
27th Feb 2013 12:48pm
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