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DEEP SILENCE !!!
All day sitting alone in the dark
Seeking where did I lose my Spark
Speechless: That I have always been
Because of a dark secret left unseen.
When words came to mouth,it cut my tongue
Throat choked, And suffocated my lung
None in the haunted room to help me survive
Blood kept flowing, no way to strive.
Tick-tock tick-tock the time crawled
The sins of my life in a flash recalled
My last breaths calling me near
I want to run, escape from this fear.
It will be a goodbye to all the lies
No one will hear anymore cries
Inject me sweetly and take me to hell
The only place of peace where I wish to dwell.
The cruelty in silence took over me
The deadly poison will soon set me free
Cleaving the mind with its brutal blade
One more time, Deaths agony remained unpaid.
Seeking where did I lose my Spark
Speechless: That I have always been
Because of a dark secret left unseen.
When words came to mouth,it cut my tongue
Throat choked, And suffocated my lung
None in the haunted room to help me survive
Blood kept flowing, no way to strive.
Tick-tock tick-tock the time crawled
The sins of my life in a flash recalled
My last breaths calling me near
I want to run, escape from this fear.
It will be a goodbye to all the lies
No one will hear anymore cries
Inject me sweetly and take me to hell
The only place of peace where I wish to dwell.
The cruelty in silence took over me
The deadly poison will soon set me free
Cleaving the mind with its brutal blade
One more time, Deaths agony remained unpaid.
Published 21st Feb 2013
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21st Feb 2013 6:42am
When stillness and a complete absence of sound engulfs you, it's best to sit quietly and listen to what's within the silence.
Lovely Dark Ink!:)
Lovely Dark Ink!:)
21st Feb 2013 7:23am
yaa.. i do that at times and it helps to know whats inside.
Thanks a lot for reading and sharing your expressions.
Thanks a lot for reading and sharing your expressions.
21st Feb 2013 10:22am
I like your rhyming which is not forced, but natural and melodious. Good poetry and I am glad you are from India.
21st Feb 2013 11:08am
Anonymous
21st Feb 2013 10:49am
Ooh, deep!
Like this one, B.
They say even silence has its right to be considered ....a sound!
Cool, hey.
Please pen on, poet!
Thanks for sharing ;-)
Pyar
Tidespotter
Like this one, B.
They say even silence has its right to be considered ....a sound!
Cool, hey.
Please pen on, poet!
Thanks for sharing ;-)
Pyar
Tidespotter
21st Feb 2013 11:10am
Anonymous
- Edited 1st May 2021 7:45am
21st Feb 2013 12:02pm
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21st Feb 2013 12:17pm
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21st Feb 2013 1:59pm
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3rd Mar 2013 6:45pm
Right on Brinda, well done, REALY like this piece, made me smile by time was done readin it... Well done Writer, well done...
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