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Rescue

Im at my breaking point
I'm ready to just collapse
and I feel like anything
I do is criticized and skepticized

I need a rescue, I can't breathe
under the weight of all things
I need a crutch, and someone
on which to lean

my cries are not heard by those
who are near by, and I'm sinking
I don't think I can take too much
more of this world
im slowly dying

the pain, it hurts, I need to rest
but this worlds got me constantly
on the move so would you stop a while
and help me get back on my feet? and
back to where I need to be?

I need to get outta here it feels like I've
been here a thousand years, I cant do this
on my own, I wasnt ready for this

I've prayed, and when I did, I meant every word
but no matter how hard I try this world seems
to enjoy denying me the satisfaction of doing
something right. God have mercy on my life!
Written by DarknessThrives
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