Distant Lovers

Oh, but this is so lovely!

So enjoyed this read.

Much truth of life in here, I daresay.....one can travel elsewhere...without even moving...

Of, course, it does present its own set of interesting dilemmas though, hey ;-)


Please keep penning!

Cheers
Tidespotter

Hey, yeah, so true...there are many ways to travel with out moving, for sure...great point.

Thank you much for your kind words.

A beautiful touching pen Rachel. :)

Thank you so much Magdalena! :)

Is this written in the third-person, Rachel? :)

Yes it is, you get an A plus today! :)

I absolutely love how you manage to put so much emotion in such few words, Rachel. This is beautiful.

"the way
the night craves
the dawn"

.... excellent!

Thank you so much Jessica! I truly appreciate it. :)

Rings true in one of my own situations. So painfully written. A beautiful read.

Hey Missy...thank you for your comment, it means a lot to me.

deep

Thanks!

Deep, strongly emotional.

Yes, thank you. :)

and though
they've never met
he knows her
the way
the body
knows the soul

true rachel o.

nice poem

strider

Thank you so much Strider!

ahh Rachel me ol' flower,

such words ..pure as the driven snow, don-cha-know. isn't luurve a wondrous thing, makes the sun shine and the birds sing even on the most cloudiest of days :>  


great stuff here Rachel.
 

Yes Eamon, it is true, "luurve" is wondrous and all that other poetic stuff...thanks for stopping by my little corner...means a lot to me! :)

We define life with man made terms as time, hours and days and we view distance as something not so good. Every breath we inhale is unique and never repeated. Such is my sense of your piece here. It is great to see you return with such timeless writing.

The beauty of this piece is your ability to aptly pair love with the intrinsic splendor and awe of nature.

A touching entry into your Hallmark Card collection :)  lol

You always know the right things to say. Thank you for that. :)

absolutely beautiful!

Thank you mememe, I appreciate your comment! :)

Beautifully written! A telepathy, telekinesis movement of souls! I know this all too well! Gorgeous Ink! :)

Thank you rain, I appreciate that!

Beautiful write Rachel. Just words alone can stir the souls of many. However having a deep connection with someone will actually move you! Cherish it sweetheart. Thanks for sharing.

Hey there doc! Your words ring very true. Thank you for stopping by. Truly! :)

Your writing always leaves an indelible mark. This is lovely and sweet without any saccharine.  Palpable happiness is truly a blessing.

It really is...thank you Aish for your kind words! :)