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The Valentine Blues
I miss the idea of you
Those someones somewheres
We were suppose to be
Just the thought of you,
The dream that never came true
And me stuck
Dealing with reality
Those someones somewheres
We were suppose to be
Just the thought of you,
The dream that never came true
And me stuck
Dealing with reality
Published 12th Feb 2013
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12th Feb 2013 2:30am
12th Feb 2013 3:03am
13th Feb 2013 1:55am
My friend,
This poignant, gentle piece has touched something deep within my soul, widened heart-cracks just a bit more, and left its sad longing upon my cheeks.
With so few words, and simple from, you have managed to express "volumes" of feelings with this beautifully wistful poem...a love that was a dream that could never be.
Thank you for sharing!
Sioch`ain leat,
Enchantress
This poignant, gentle piece has touched something deep within my soul, widened heart-cracks just a bit more, and left its sad longing upon my cheeks.
With so few words, and simple from, you have managed to express "volumes" of feelings with this beautifully wistful poem...a love that was a dream that could never be.
Thank you for sharing!
Sioch`ain leat,
Enchantress
