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Bury The Castle
brick by brick
we build it up
brick by brick
it is useless
brick by brick
is getting boring
brick by brick
we are getting smaller
brick by brick
it controls us
brick by brick
we fall shorter
brick by brick
is boring
brick by brick
is controlling
brick by brick
we're smaller
brick by brick
I'm tired of this
brick by brick
help me
brick by brick
bury the castle
we build it up
brick by brick
it is useless
brick by brick
is getting boring
brick by brick
we are getting smaller
brick by brick
it controls us
brick by brick
we fall shorter
brick by brick
is boring
brick by brick
is controlling
brick by brick
we're smaller
brick by brick
I'm tired of this
brick by brick
help me
brick by brick
bury the castle
Published 9th Feb 2013
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10th Feb 2013 1:18am
The first thing that comes to mind, is Pink Floyd's The Wall album.
Then I think of how so many barriers stop us from progressing .
Cool poem.
Koreanghost.
Then I think of how so many barriers stop us from progressing .
Cool poem.
Koreanghost.
10th Feb 2013 4:33am
i've never heard of that song
thats true there are lots of walls that can keep us hidden, im glad you liked it! :D
thats true there are lots of walls that can keep us hidden, im glad you liked it! :D
