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Twenty words for now
overwhelmed, surrendered
so stopped struggling
against the current
situation
allow
release, let go
breathe and flow
immersed and smiling
drift
so stopped struggling
against the current
situation
allow
release, let go
breathe and flow
immersed and smiling
drift
Published 6th Feb 2013
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6th Feb 2013 11:05am
6th Feb 2013 11:12am
Anonymous
6th Feb 2013 12:25pm
I could feel the tension being released in this beautifully expressed piece! Great poem, Atakti! :)
6th Feb 2013 4:11pm
Anonymous
6th Feb 2013 1:46pm
nice write ataki...strider
6th Feb 2013 4:11pm
6th Feb 2013 4:09pm
Soothing, like all the tense in the frame of the poem releases suddenly; wonderfulness it is.
6th Feb 2013 4:12pm
6th Feb 2013 4:13pm
6th Feb 2013 8:12pm
6th Feb 2013 9:26pm
Twenty words is all you need! Nicely done Atakti. I may expand my own entry too. Great stuff!
6th Feb 2013 9:41pm
You thinking to expand your fire one, huh? Go for it! Will be interested to read.
Thanks for your comment, Evan. :)
Thanks for your comment, Evan. :)
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