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< summer love in spanish >
on the beach
in mexico
the heat of the sun is too much
and i lie in the shade
of an old soft drink stand
it's not a popular beach
so close to the power plant
but close
to my dad's office
i'm here
visiting him
my terrible spanish
getting a little better
walking the streets
just looking
reading the signs
buying pan dulce
it's so cheap
and every bun of this sweet bread
is beautiful
so every morning i go and buy a bag of it
and eat it the rest of the day
carrying it through the streets
looking at the signs
trying to read them with my dictionary
writing letters to my mom
never mentioning you
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Published 5th Feb 2013
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Anonymous
5th Feb 2013 11:48am
nice lemmy...strider
Anonymous
- Edited 5th Feb 2013 12:11pm
5th Feb 2013 12:08pm
Cool poem, casual.
You know what they say..the best way to learn a new language is....
Oh, and LOVE the last line....
Please pen on, poet!
Thanks for sharing :)
Cheers
Tidespotter
Ps. Those pics of them pink meringues...made me feel so peckish now... save me one, yeah? tee hee....
Muchos gracias, amigo!
You know what they say..the best way to learn a new language is....
Oh, and LOVE the last line....
Please pen on, poet!
Thanks for sharing :)
Cheers
Tidespotter
Ps. Those pics of them pink meringues...made me feel so peckish now... save me one, yeah? tee hee....
Muchos gracias, amigo!
5th Feb 2013 1:40pm
5th Feb 2013 7:55pm
I like your style of writing. It is a style I am not particularly good at. lol
Hence why I admire it when I see it :)
Hence why I admire it when I see it :)
