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do you remember that childhood dreams
sometimes cold and full of screams.
nights grew long and bumbs at night.
Result in catastrophe from creepy fright.
soothing words creped up in ear.
touched you so and whiped your tear.
tears fell black from those haunting days.
waiting for the sun to shine.
sticky fingers from strawberry pie.
you promised that day you wount make me cry.
sun shined in my face, and wend blew threw my hair..
no words can show me that you do care.
shouting shouting
that beats up my head..
droped dead body from what you said.
imposed tranquility between the brunt of the sky.
baried know so no longer i cry
-kumiko yamamoto
sometimes cold and full of screams.
nights grew long and bumbs at night.
Result in catastrophe from creepy fright.
soothing words creped up in ear.
touched you so and whiped your tear.
tears fell black from those haunting days.
waiting for the sun to shine.
sticky fingers from strawberry pie.
you promised that day you wount make me cry.
sun shined in my face, and wend blew threw my hair..
no words can show me that you do care.
shouting shouting
that beats up my head..
droped dead body from what you said.
imposed tranquility between the brunt of the sky.
baried know so no longer i cry
-kumiko yamamoto
Written by
AlexnEmoLand
(RevolutionOfAlex)
Published 28th Jan 2013
| Edited 9th Jun 2013
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Re: body
28th Jan 2013 3:28am
the devastating compression of an innocent ---
very powerful words Denka ....
very powerful words Denka ....
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28th Jan 2013 3:28am
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28th Jan 2013 3:45am
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28th Jan 2013 3:46am
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28th Jan 2013 4:10am
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28th Jan 2013 4:15am
A very powerful poem, dearest Kumiko, and one that evokes feelings I know well... deepest love and trust, which some cruel people so often end up betraying. I was betrayed by someone recently in fact, and am starting again to search for love anew... so this poem resonates with me very much. Your poetry is always beautiful! Even in the dark of it, I am warmed by the light of your spirit.
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28th Jan 2013 4:18am
oh my goshh
im so happy you comment you make me feel as if i actually mean something
gomawo lots friends
HUGGLES*********************** <3 <3
im so happy you comment you make me feel as if i actually mean something
gomawo lots friends
HUGGLES*********************** <3 <3
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28th Jan 2013 4:43am
It is my pleasure, sweetie! You have remarkable talent, a vibrant spirit, a deep soul, and a truly romantic heart. All of which makes you a true artist as well as a wonderful person! :D
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28th Jan 2013 4:31am
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28th Jan 2013 9:12am
Arigato baby kanisiwa
I love it keep writing fire
Your in my heart now
BRAVO !
I love it keep writing fire
Your in my heart now
BRAVO !
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28th Jan 2013 9:55pm
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4th Feb 2013 2:27am
I love the last stanza of this poem. I can feel a lot of emotions from this. Excellent work
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