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Forget The Blues Tonight
Ah there is my creamy delight
a taste to savor nice and slow
or fast as the case may be
Crescendos seem to come
when my tongue is nice and steady
but sometimes the insanity plays control
forced staccato
For what fully emerges
is the instrument of my desire
so wanting to engage in your fire
Is there some balance to the mutual chorus
exaggerated highs in the sighs
what moves more the lips or thighs?
a taste to savor nice and slow
or fast as the case may be
Crescendos seem to come
when my tongue is nice and steady
but sometimes the insanity plays control
forced staccato
For what fully emerges
is the instrument of my desire
so wanting to engage in your fire
Is there some balance to the mutual chorus
exaggerated highs in the sighs
what moves more the lips or thighs?
Published 26th Jan 2013
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26th Jan 2013 2:04am
Great poem.. what moves more...depends the position your in...(wink wink)
Koreanghost
Koreanghost
26th Jan 2013 2:13am
26th Jan 2013 5:10am
"Is there some balance to the mutual chorus
exaggerated highs in the sighs
what moves more the lips or thighs?"
hmmmm.... both body parts seemingly are equal opportunist. lol
I would say they each have different missions but can produce same said pleasure! ;)
SEXY INK, Jazz!
exaggerated highs in the sighs
what moves more the lips or thighs?"
hmmmm.... both body parts seemingly are equal opportunist. lol
I would say they each have different missions but can produce same said pleasure! ;)
SEXY INK, Jazz!
26th Jan 2013 5:43pm
No argument here; never thought about the equal opportunistic nature of the lips and thighs before.
I am honored that you enjoyed my collection of words.
I am honored that you enjoyed my collection of words.
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26th Jan 2013 7:02am
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26th Jan 2013 5:45pm
27th Jan 2013 11:52pm
A delight to read and so natural...methinks you have found a style that you feel at one with.
Most enjoyable in an almost transcendental way that gets away from so many of the cliched bump n grind poems around.
Most enjoyable in an almost transcendental way that gets away from so many of the cliched bump n grind poems around.
28th Jan 2013 00:20am
28th Jan 2013 4:06pm
I agree with T Ray bro...
This stanza:
"For what fully emerges
is the instrument of my desire
so wanting to engage in your fire"
...has double meaning, and you cleverly put them in words.
Way to go my buddy JAZZ!
This stanza:
"For what fully emerges
is the instrument of my desire
so wanting to engage in your fire"
...has double meaning, and you cleverly put them in words.
Way to go my buddy JAZZ!
28th Jan 2013 5:35pm
