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Teen Fiend
He views the world through the eye of his penis
Thinks girls are there for his convenience
Conceit his ever present companion
Vanity his mentor
Strutting peacock of the parks
Desires, wants must meet instant gratification
Ratification of his beliefs
Meets girl of similar ilk
Knickers of silk untouched
But she aware her effect
Demands respect that he is loath to give
Cannot live without quenching his fire
Assuage desire
Took her illicitly
Justice calls for retribution
He sits in institution lamenting
But not repenting
Considers it foul luck
In court accused tried
Just for a fuck
He pleads weeps and cries
Judge and jury see through the lies
Arrogance and ignorance unchecked
Have led him to this end
Yet he will mend his ways
In days to come
He sits in his cell institutional hell
Aware of men who want to share his body fair
To Sodomise
They take him by force
Now he knows
What it’s like to be that girl
Thinks girls are there for his convenience
Conceit his ever present companion
Vanity his mentor
Strutting peacock of the parks
Desires, wants must meet instant gratification
Ratification of his beliefs
Meets girl of similar ilk
Knickers of silk untouched
But she aware her effect
Demands respect that he is loath to give
Cannot live without quenching his fire
Assuage desire
Took her illicitly
Justice calls for retribution
He sits in institution lamenting
But not repenting
Considers it foul luck
In court accused tried
Just for a fuck
He pleads weeps and cries
Judge and jury see through the lies
Arrogance and ignorance unchecked
Have led him to this end
Yet he will mend his ways
In days to come
He sits in his cell institutional hell
Aware of men who want to share his body fair
To Sodomise
They take him by force
Now he knows
What it’s like to be that girl
Published 24th Jan 2013
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24th Jan 2013 7:14pm
this is a pretty exact representation of most of this generations male species and what they stand for and how they think. good poem.
24th Jan 2013 10:34pm
Anonymous
27th Jan 2013 3:03pm
Wow, karma at play then.
Great effort, enjoyed following the trail you set.
Query here: what did you mean in this line...
*But she aware her effect
Write on, poet!
Tidespotter
Great effort, enjoyed following the trail you set.
Query here: what did you mean in this line...
*But she aware her effect
Write on, poet!
Tidespotter
Hi TS Thanks for the feedback.
I should have put 'But she, aware of her effect'etc...
The effect she has on men and particularly on him. She knows her worth and asks to be respected a concept unkown to him who thinks women are just a recepticle for a penis.
I should have put 'But she, aware of her effect'etc...
The effect she has on men and particularly on him. She knows her worth and asks to be respected a concept unkown to him who thinks women are just a recepticle for a penis.
