The new Lullaby Idea (Help)

I would agree with you, i like this one better, good writing!!!

I like the idea of creating a lullaby. I actually think this is a more sinister offering than the other two, which might contradict the idea of a lullaby, but I think this is more structurally sound than the others. I have edited it as a personal thing below, this is just my own personal opinion and you don't have to take any of it on board:  
   
When the day is dark  
and all hope is gone,  
the sun will rise  
with a brand new dawn  
   
the world is safe  
the terrors are quelled,  
the light will protect    
all of the world  
   
where lights now fall  
pitch black will reign,  
light is alive  
for those who came
   
we call out to the light    
to bring hope renewed  
darkness will rise;  
then it will lose    
   
(Repeat darkness will rise then it will lose once)

I'm trying to go with how light will conquer the dark. I guess it might need some work, maybe a new stanza.

I like this one! I think that to get the message of light conquering, you may want to capitalize Light whenever it's used, to show it's superiority to the darkness. But I love the message!

I like this!