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nicking veins of collective unconsciousness
I stood unbidden
& breathless
under the static of skylines shattered
'.....the conditions of existence' he mumbled
victorian shadows about him
'the stillness in me.. it dies surging amongst chaos'
'I saw you under october rains..
ethereal lightening like twisted metal..' I whispered
'I saw you there.
somewhere you had never been but always were..
lost in a stalemate.
drunk on knowledge'
'I feel like I've stared down the soul of death
.....but this time I wasnt afraid'
...light dimming in caustic eyes
breaking the sky
he rains secrets in the shadows of thunder
& breathless
under the static of skylines shattered
'.....the conditions of existence' he mumbled
victorian shadows about him
'the stillness in me.. it dies surging amongst chaos'
'I saw you under october rains..
ethereal lightening like twisted metal..' I whispered
'I saw you there.
somewhere you had never been but always were..
lost in a stalemate.
drunk on knowledge'
'I feel like I've stared down the soul of death
.....but this time I wasnt afraid'
...light dimming in caustic eyes
breaking the sky
he rains secrets in the shadows of thunder
Published 9th Aug 2010
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10th Aug 2010 6:05pm
Your words are always soul shaking and roll darkly like soil and storms. It's like seeing a moment in time through tilted eyes, the world a little bit strange..but so sharp. The images you evoke are stunning....it's like you've pulled them out of the darkest sky and woven them together so you're left with a picture of beautiful tension. If any of that makes sense...what I'm trying to say I think, is your writing is fucking brilliant.
