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Choke
Waiting
and wasting
wondering where i begin
and how ill end
slowly drowning
in the ash that surrounds me
choking on the hope i once had
and reaching, reaching towards
nothing
and wasting
wondering where i begin
and how ill end
slowly drowning
in the ash that surrounds me
choking on the hope i once had
and reaching, reaching towards
nothing
Published 18th Jan 2013
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18th Jan 2013 1:22am
I can definitely relate to this especially "slowly drowning
in the ash that surrounds me
choking on the hope i once had" This short piece says a lot and it was certainly a nice read.
in the ash that surrounds me
choking on the hope i once had" This short piece says a lot and it was certainly a nice read.
19th Jan 2013 6:27pm
Thanks Chaos Collector its been a really hard week to handle so i tried to express it the only way i know how it means a lot that someone took notice.
Btw - like the user name
Btw - like the user name
You're welcome Jasmine. I can understand where you're coming. When time start to get rough and I need something to release my emotions and thought, my number 1 thing I rely on is writing poetry.
Thank youu :) Jasmine's a nice name too
Thank youu :) Jasmine's a nice name too
9th Feb 2013 6:33am
19th May 2013 6:11pm
Ah, choking is a great word for that constant struggle and stifle of everyday life. We go nowhere and then...well it gets bad.
