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Water Works
Do not
try to
wipe away
my tears
silly man
take a
step back,
revel in
what you
have done
really see
I insist,
watch them
fall away
into nothing
watch them
disappear
try to
wipe away
my tears
silly man
take a
step back,
revel in
what you
have done
really see
I insist,
watch them
fall away
into nothing
watch them
disappear
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Re: Water Works
15th Jan 2013 3:24pm
This says so much with so few words. I really like that. Your delivery was great as well. Well done, nikkimoe!
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Re: Water Works
15th Jan 2013 3:40pm
Re: Water Works
Anonymous
15th Jan 2013 3:58pm
This is so beautiful, vulnerable and bare...
Greatly written!
Greatly written!
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15th Jan 2013 4:06pm
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15th Jan 2013 8:57pm
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Anonymous
15th Jan 2013 7:22pm
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15th Jan 2013 8:23pm
Re: Water Works
16th Jan 2013 2:09am
Re: Water Works
16th Jan 2013 3:57am
WIDE OPEN...IS YOUR HEART HERE....
THE REALNESS AND RAWNESS SPEAK VOLUMES
FIRE
THE REALNESS AND RAWNESS SPEAK VOLUMES
FIRE
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Re: Water Works
16th Jan 2013 1:15pm
Re: Water Works
16th Jan 2013 10:45pm
Re: Water Works
Oh Oh ... who made you write this then NM ....
Pain-filled retaliation from the vision of the pain created ....
We def need to talk girl .... !!! ....
As ever, thought provoking & strong ....
It' clear that you're grateful to people for reading/commenting ...
So, i'll say, don't thank me, just pat yourself on the back & keep on keeping on ....
Easy now ...
Big V
Peace & Love madame ....
Ooohh and ... COOL Pic !!!
Pain-filled retaliation from the vision of the pain created ....
We def need to talk girl .... !!! ....
As ever, thought provoking & strong ....
It' clear that you're grateful to people for reading/commenting ...
So, i'll say, don't thank me, just pat yourself on the back & keep on keeping on ....
Easy now ...
Big V
Peace & Love madame ....
Ooohh and ... COOL Pic !!!
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