deepundergroundpoetry.com
twinkle twankle
Twinkle twankle
little star
Daddys drunk
in Dublin bar
optics lined up
behind the counter
shining down on all the banter
bookies are not open yet
another hour before you bet
on two flys running up the wall
stall
stall
stall
little star
Daddys drunk
in Dublin bar
optics lined up
behind the counter
shining down on all the banter
bookies are not open yet
another hour before you bet
on two flys running up the wall
stall
stall
stall
Published 15th Jan 2013
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 3
reading list entries 0
comments 4
reads 706
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
9th Feb 2013 9:36pm
hahaha...i'm surprised there are no comments on this...i thought it was great...love the ending :)
Faith
Faith
10th Feb 2013 12:26pm
10th Feb 2013 5:54am
Love the images and rhythm in this nursery rhyme from the other side of the tracks.
10th Feb 2013 12:31pm
